The Mechanic vs. TL Bot
Critiques & Comments
# 44
Posted:
Apr 16 2007, 12:38 PM
lol i thought that all the pages were doneby jonny at first good job both of u
# 43
Posted:
Apr 16 2007, 12:38 PM
lol i thought that all the pages were doneby jonny at first good job both of u
# 42
Posted:
Apr 16 2007, 07:11 AM
Yes! TL Bot battle!
Red, I loved your comic, it was very funny. The rage mode part was perfect and the TL Bot extreme was awsome. Can\'t wait to see your next fight.
Red, I loved your comic, it was very funny. The rage mode part was perfect and the TL Bot extreme was awsome. Can\'t wait to see your next fight.
# 41
Posted:
Apr 15 2007, 08:54 PM
RedRevolver! Excellent fight. I love the TL Bot EXTREME, it was completely unexpected. It was worth the wait. I can\'t wait to fight you when my character is up. b\"b
# 40
Posted:
Apr 15 2007, 06:48 PM
Eee! TL bot is too cute XD
# 39
Posted:
Apr 15 2007, 03:25 PM
thanks for the love everyone. I\'m glad you guys liked it ^___^
# 38
Posted:
Apr 15 2007, 12:52 PM
Ryutari told me to see this match Red.
Once my characters up, we\'ve GOT to battle.
TL Bot is cute... but not as cute as those flying toasters from that one screensaver
Once my characters up, we\'ve GOT to battle.
TL Bot is cute... but not as cute as those flying toasters from that one screensaver
# 37
Posted:
Apr 15 2007, 12:28 PM
TL Bot was a great idea man way to go, please ViperChief put your side up A.S.A.P dude!
# 36
Posted:
Apr 15 2007, 02:30 AM
omg Red.
That was the most adorable thing ever.
That was the most adorable thing ever.
# 35
Posted:
Apr 14 2007, 03:07 PM
Red, you are soooo awesome!! I LOVE TL BOT! you\'ve made me a fan forever! The story was very entertaining and adorable. I especially love that TL bot loves kitties because I love kitties! In the same, scary way : D KITTY KITTIES! (tho this had nothing to do with the battle, it was necessary to mention kitties : D) Ahem, TL bot is just so cute! And his antics made me lol everywhere. However, the mech\'s hands were wonky in a few places and there wasn\'t much variety with the tones. The art could be spiced up a little more, but still it was awesome : D
# 34
Posted:
Apr 14 2007, 12:53 PM
Wei in a cover <3.....
But seriously. XD There is no way I can talk seriously about this, even tho it was drawn pretty well, and your art is so cute, what really got me was the humor, it was clean and good. Clean things that make me laugh deserve clapping. I\'m not making much sense today.
But seriously. XD There is no way I can talk seriously about this, even tho it was drawn pretty well, and your art is so cute, what really got me was the humor, it was clean and good. Clean things that make me laugh deserve clapping. I\'m not making much sense today.
# 33
Posted:
Apr 13 2007, 10:02 PM
I\'m glad that people laughed that makes me happy.
# 32
Posted:
Apr 13 2007, 03:47 PM
Funny, funny stuff Red. I\'m very impressed, told you not to worry! So, so sorry I couldn\'t get mine anywhere close to done. I\'ll finish it up soon as possible. Great job on your part.
# 31
Posted:
Apr 13 2007, 10:54 AM
I laughed. That was wonderful. Only thing that really bothered me (apart from having to peer really closely to read the banana part) was the hands. They were pretty off a good portion of the time...try using your own hands as a model if necessary.
Viperchief, sorry you didn\'t have enough time to finish your part. The art looks really good, and I look forward to seeing it in a BB.
Viperchief, sorry you didn\'t have enough time to finish your part. The art looks really good, and I look forward to seeing it in a BB.
# 30
Posted:
Apr 13 2007, 06:26 AM
Red, that last page is the cutest thing ever.
Shame you couldn\'t finish Viper, looked like a great start!
Shame you couldn\'t finish Viper, looked like a great start!
# 29
Posted:
Apr 13 2007, 12:09 AM
RedRevolver! That was ADORABLE!! I loved it!
I saw the preview images and I was thinking, \"oh dear GOD, she didn\'t REALLY draw the comic like THAT, did she??\" But you didn\'t. The art was really good. :3
The only thing I can think of is you don\'t have to fill in every square inch of the page with grey, you can leave more white space for highlights and stuff.
Story-wise, it was really cute and simple, which works perfectly for the character.
An excellent debut!
I saw the preview images and I was thinking, \"oh dear GOD, she didn\'t REALLY draw the comic like THAT, did she??\" But you didn\'t. The art was really good. :3
The only thing I can think of is you don\'t have to fill in every square inch of the page with grey, you can leave more white space for highlights and stuff.
Story-wise, it was really cute and simple, which works perfectly for the character.
An excellent debut!
# 28
Posted:
Apr 12 2007, 10:13 PM
Banana?! That doesn\'t even RHYME! I\'ll give you entertainment points for sure, Red
# 27
Posted:
Apr 12 2007, 09:21 PM
Nice Red. Funny, yet confusing at parts. But, I was able to get past that. So, yeah, keep it up!
# 26
Posted:
Apr 7 2007, 06:46 PM
AHHHHH!!! EXCITMENT! I WANNAAAAA SEEEEEEE IT!
# 25
Posted:
Apr 7 2007, 05:07 PM
hey Viper, don\'t sweat it. Family is definitley more important than anything!!
# 24
Posted:
Apr 7 2007, 01:40 PM
Viper....finish the pages and submit them as a beyond battle then we all can enjoy it
# 23
Posted:
Apr 6 2007, 05:49 PM
Yeah, I suck. I had zero time to work on this. I had it all planned out to be great too. Work and family just took priority, sorry Red. I will finish this up just for you though, you deserve at least that from me. Hell, I\'ll even send the pages to you if you want em. I threw up the unfinished pages at least. Sorry again.
# 22
Posted:
Apr 5 2007, 05:34 PM
GAH! yeah, sending several pages on DIAL UP is quite difficult. I had to scramble to find a high speed connection and email it to wei... stupid internet.... ruins my LIFE! AT LEAST ITS DONE! IM SO NERVOUS!!
# 21
Posted:
Apr 5 2007, 03:08 PM
hmmm. Almost time. bwehehehe. evil laughter. EVIL LAUGHTER
# 20
Posted:
Mar 31 2007, 10:59 PM
YES. Make it so, number one. I look forwards to this with unrestrained glee.
# 19
Posted:
Mar 25 2007, 06:51 PM
I\'m looking forward to this big time. Both of you have really distinct and inspirational characters... I don\'t know who I\'ll pull for.
I\'m looking forward to TL\'s first, and I\'m hoping Mechanic will deliver to expectation. : D
Maybe I\'m late to say it, but give it your all.
I\'m looking forward to TL\'s first, and I\'m hoping Mechanic will deliver to expectation. : D
Maybe I\'m late to say it, but give it your all.
# 18
Posted:
Mar 23 2007, 07:41 PM
this whole thing is bringing me to a whole new level of anxiety.... I don\'t know why... but it\'s freaking me out! hahaa....
# 17
Posted:
Mar 23 2007, 03:11 PM
*Pregame chatter pregame chatter Pregame chatter excitement excitement*
Yeah. Break a leg, both of ya!
Yeah. Break a leg, both of ya!
# 16
Posted:
Mar 19 2007, 12:01 AM
HAHA... awesome =)
# 15
Posted:
Mar 13 2007, 08:16 PM
I can\'t wait to see this fight. I think TL Bot will win with his RAGE mode. xD
# 14
Posted:
Mar 13 2007, 11:41 AM
Oh man this should be sexcellent.
# 13
Posted:
Mar 12 2007, 06:38 PM
hahaha rabbit rabbit gave me LOL WTF and OMG all in one comment! Excellent!! tee hee.
# 12
Posted:
Mar 12 2007, 08:03 AM
I\'m fighting Larathen next. I would be fighting him first, but he\'s working on a beyond battle right now. But I would be delighted to battle you after him. Haha, that would be a damn ridiculous match!!
# 11
Posted:
Mar 12 2007, 02:58 AM
Ive so got dibs on TL Bot after this. how the hell did i miss such an awesome character like this?
good luck fellas put on a good show
Cheers
Sphinx
good luck fellas put on a good show
Cheers
Sphinx
# 10
Posted:
Mar 11 2007, 10:04 PM
TL BOT!! OMG!! I\'M SO HAPPY FOR YOU THAT I CAN\'T TURN OFF CAPS LOCK WTF LOL
# 9
Posted:
Mar 10 2007, 09:20 PM
Do I sense a bit of word-play Red? Haha, grats on not giving up with TL Bot and best of luck to the both of you!
# 8
Posted:
Mar 10 2007, 02:47 PM
this battle will be incredibly awesome, and Wei will get all the credit for it. hahaha.
# 7
Posted:
Mar 9 2007, 11:27 PM
ADORABLE. THAT IS ALLLLLL.
# 6
Posted:
Mar 9 2007, 08:42 PM
Wei is to blame, I blame Wei. Speakin of which, you\'ve been on my hitlist for a good long while Wei, we\'ll have to make something of that too soon.
# 5
Posted:
Mar 9 2007, 08:03 PM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww this is cute.
Good luck ReddyR :3
Good luck ReddyR :3
# 4
Posted:
Mar 9 2007, 03:32 PM
this is entirely my fault
# 3
Posted:
Mar 9 2007, 03:24 PM
Awsomeness!
# 2
Posted:
Mar 9 2007, 02:59 PM
Coolness, can\'t wait to see what ya come up with. Good luck with your first battle!
# 1
Posted:
Mar 9 2007, 02:54 PM
WHOOOAAA!!!! I THOUGHT THIS DAY WOULD NEVER COME. TL Bot\'s first battle... *tear*
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
4 weeks
Ended:
Apr 19th, 2007
Votes Cast:
45
Page Views:
1681
Winner:
Red
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