Fluffs - Every comic, I just think you keep on improving. You captured Ghost and Ben's characters so beautifully here and that Egg Dealer cameo at the end cracked me up. Really enjoyed reading yours.
Croco - While most of the comic looks unfinished (and I def know how painting a comic is a tedious process) , I love the cute story you got going on here. The text could've used some resizing on the bigger side and the sudden increase of the page size in the last page felt a bit jarring but, I love the art though! I just had to zoom out a lot to appreciate it lol.
Secret Santa Roulette Rumble / Fluffsamasprime vs. Crocostyle
Critiques & Comments
# 10
Posted:
Dec 29 2020, 09:17 PM
# 9
Posted:
Dec 29 2020, 08:37 PM
Fluff: I like how Ben is forcing holiday spirit onto Ghost appearing out of no where to do so. it's pretty funny making Ben a holiday mage a nice silly moment.
Croco: A cute little story and nice seeing a street magician interacting with actual magic. Also your painterly style is nice as always. Be careful with your resizing of comics for submission but you're making progress and doing more and more for your comic stuff so I do hope you enjoy the process and do some more when you can.
Croco: A cute little story and nice seeing a street magician interacting with actual magic. Also your painterly style is nice as always. Be careful with your resizing of comics for submission but you're making progress and doing more and more for your comic stuff so I do hope you enjoy the process and do some more when you can.
# 8
Posted:
Dec 29 2020, 07:01 PM
Fluff: I absolutely love Ben as the unsettling holiday mage with his ever-changing sweater and Dealer-brand nog. You remembered to have him work his magic, too (which I need to do sometime...)! It was a delightful little bite of silliness that made me smile.
Crocostyle: Aww, how cute. It's a sweet little story about self-esteem. The new character is very sweet. I kind of wish I knew a little more about her going into this. I like your dedication to painterly rendering, even under this kind of time crunch.
Crocostyle: Aww, how cute. It's a sweet little story about self-esteem. The new character is very sweet. I kind of wish I knew a little more about her going into this. I like your dedication to painterly rendering, even under this kind of time crunch.
# 7
Posted:
Dec 28 2020, 08:24 PM
Fluff: I love the dynamic you've given Ben and Ghost, lol! Not one I expected but it was honestly amusing to see Ben just doing his Ben thing (loved how you included his power of word manipulation!!) While Ghost is just utterly baffled lol.
Croco: what a heartwarming story! Your painterly style never fails to impress, though I admit I wish you had put a little love into your backgrounds! Also, at times your text was either too much or too little for the bubble--id recommend at the very least trying to make sure you don't let the text bleed outside the bubbles. That last page was real cute tho!
Croco: what a heartwarming story! Your painterly style never fails to impress, though I admit I wish you had put a little love into your backgrounds! Also, at times your text was either too much or too little for the bubble--id recommend at the very least trying to make sure you don't let the text bleed outside the bubbles. That last page was real cute tho!
# 6
Posted:
Dec 27 2020, 02:30 AM
Fluff- You know my favourite thing about your art is its the opposite of "stiff" everyone looks so lively, the gestures have so much personality and character to them. When Ben yells "BEHOLD THE HOLIDAY SPIRIT" man, I believed it, his body language sold it haha. This is something I've noticed in all of your comics and I'm envious of it. Great job!
Oh, the egg dealer wink at the end also cracked me up. This was a very enjoyable story, I just wish there was more of it!
Croco- Even though this comic is a lil unfinished looking in places, your sense of shape when you draw is so strong and appealing, everything remained clear and pleasant to look at. I found myself enjoying this a lot despite having to squint to read certain pages it left me with a comfy feeling. I have to say as well, I'm a huge fan of your bat girls design, she's seriously adorable.
Oh, the egg dealer wink at the end also cracked me up. This was a very enjoyable story, I just wish there was more of it!
Croco- Even though this comic is a lil unfinished looking in places, your sense of shape when you draw is so strong and appealing, everything remained clear and pleasant to look at. I found myself enjoying this a lot despite having to squint to read certain pages it left me with a comfy feeling. I have to say as well, I'm a huge fan of your bat girls design, she's seriously adorable.
# 5
Posted:
Dec 22 2020, 05:45 PM
Fluff- a fluttz oc for fluff and fluttz got fluff's spider...*whough*
I love the really wholesome but kiiinda sinister vibes Ben gives off. Also Ghost being 10,000% done with this is a treat.
Croco- The Abby is an extra treat for us! Very cute.
I love the really wholesome but kiiinda sinister vibes Ben gives off. Also Ghost being 10,000% done with this is a treat.
Croco- The Abby is an extra treat for us! Very cute.
# 4
Posted:
Dec 22 2020, 05:41 PM
Fluff - Chaotic Christmas energy XD Love the little details like Kit and Jade building a snowgator, and egg dealer popping up to advertise the eggnog.
Croco - A cute little interaction! It’s nice to see them bond over magic The text got a bit too small on page 2 though and was hard to read.
Croco - A cute little interaction! It’s nice to see them bond over magic The text got a bit too small on page 2 though and was hard to read.
# 3
Posted:
Dec 22 2020, 12:47 AM
Both of these comics were lovely, nice job! : )
Fluff- Oh no, Egg Dealer's nog, lol! I really enjoyed the poses you had in your comic, and the humorous tone to it. I can definitely see Ghost pulling the scrooge act and having to be reprimanded by someone about it. This was a really fun read!
Croco- This was an adorable comic! I loved the animated feel and how excited the two characters are about magic and learning magical tricks! The spread on the final page is a lovely illustration.
Fluff- Oh no, Egg Dealer's nog, lol! I really enjoyed the poses you had in your comic, and the humorous tone to it. I can definitely see Ghost pulling the scrooge act and having to be reprimanded by someone about it. This was a really fun read!
Croco- This was an adorable comic! I loved the animated feel and how excited the two characters are about magic and learning magical tricks! The spread on the final page is a lovely illustration.
# 2
Posted:
Dec 21 2020, 10:10 PM
Please be gentle.
# 1
Posted:
Dec 7 2020, 06:32 PM
...wait for it...
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Dec 29th, 2020
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Croc: Had to zoom my window a bit to read as it was small on some pages, dunno if that was a resolution problem. But other than that asfafa this was wholesome. Ben is SUCH A NERD. Still dig your painterly styles, when everything is cohesive even if it isnt fully flesh looks wonders.