Intro Story / Clarke, Christopher

Intro Story — Clarke, Christopher

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Darius Corry
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443 comments

# 7 Posted: Jan 6 2011, 12:43 PM

Dude now you know this is coming out of love, but I def feel like you could've done better with these pages. I've seen more complete pages on battles to which you had an actual deadline, and yet when you had no restraint nor time limit and yet you've delivered some more unfinished panels with no backgrounds and flat contouring.

I still believe you when you say you're only on this site to showcase and condition yourself, but you and I both know this wasn't the best you could've given us.

Fearn
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366 comments

# 6 Posted: Jan 6 2011, 12:26 PM

"trained in military fighting combat, he's more like a Jason statham."

JASON STATHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAM!!!!!!!! <3 <3 <3

(such a shame I can't seem to be constructive)

Hiemie
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511 comments

# 5 Posted: Jan 5 2011, 10:42 PM

HOORAY

Fox24
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215 comments

# 4 Posted: Jan 5 2011, 10:15 PM

ok...

Hiemie
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511 comments

# 3 Posted: Jan 5 2011, 10:12 PM

So... sharingan.

Fox24
Artist

215 comments

# 2 Posted: Jan 5 2011, 09:49 PM

no I mean he can't like do anything but see someone skateboard and then he can do it. Not like he see's magic and poof got magic or see's fire or can make magic fire from his eyes. Just a see and learn kinda guy.