As Above, So Below / Resnick vs. Serath Klodus
Critiques & Comments
# 1
Posted:
Dec 21 2023, 01:42 AM
Looks like you both got a feel for where your strengths and weaknesses lie when putting out comics within the confine of 1-2 days!
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
24 hours
Ended:
Dec 28th, 2023
Votes Cast:
7
Page Views:
262
Winner:
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STEALREHN - I liked how to tackled the theme of the comic, but I would have liked a little more contrast in the characters and background. I think an easy way of doing that would be to keep them color coordinated but filled them in a lighter version of their color. You wouldn't need to shade or anything more, but it would help show off the details you already put into each panel.
BATTY - I liked your story here. Nice and simple. If the texture was intensional then ignore this: if you knock up the contrast more after scanning your pages I think it will bring clarity of your work will and show off the cool character designs you and expressions you are able to display in the comics. I really enjoy that part of your art.