nice battle Yosai. You have gorgeous art, but like some have mentioned it\'s a little unclear at times.
Rax...
Orange vs. Sol
Critiques & Comments
# 16
Posted:
Oct 18 2006, 12:21 PM
# 15
Posted:
Oct 18 2006, 12:18 PM
nice yosai. . .i will admit at first i was confused by oranges injury. . .but i get it now. . .altho i think unless this was way after sol was pretty eager to jump into another battle with a pointy eared orange wearing fighter. . .i think if i were him i would have had some what of an internal monolog goin. . .
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extention?. . . .come on mate. . .it was a rematch. . and she asked you to wait for her other battle to be done before finally re challenging. . . .you had a MEGA extention already. . .i think you just have a wicked case of the Procrastinator disease. . . .its a rough one to get over. . .but yur a vet homie. .nows the time.
good effort yosai hope to take you on myself someday
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extention?. . . .come on mate. . .it was a rematch. . and she asked you to wait for her other battle to be done before finally re challenging. . . .you had a MEGA extention already. . .i think you just have a wicked case of the Procrastinator disease. . . .its a rough one to get over. . .but yur a vet homie. .nows the time.
good effort yosai hope to take you on myself someday
# 14
Posted:
Oct 18 2006, 07:53 AM
I don\'t think you can get an extention on a 1 or 2 week battle anyways.
# 13
Posted:
Oct 18 2006, 12:44 AM
Yeah you guys were on Wei\'s shitlist. Can\'t get an extension until you submit three(?) completed battles on time.
# 12
Posted:
Oct 17 2006, 11:52 PM
I don\'t think you\'re allowed extensions right after a default. Something about being on a shit list or something. Hope we get to see your work, Rax.
# 11
Posted:
Oct 17 2006, 10:46 PM
Apparantly there was a misunderstanding. Don\'t worry, I\'ll make it up tp you guys. I\'d say I promise, but honestly coming from me that doesnt mean alot to you guys at this point. I really do feel bad, because I have been putting alot of effort into this battle. Just keep an eye out.
Great battle Yosai. Sorry I didn\'t follow through, AGAIN!
Great battle Yosai. Sorry I didn\'t follow through, AGAIN!
# 10
Posted:
Oct 17 2006, 10:26 PM
WTF?! I asked for an extension.....
# 9
Posted:
Oct 17 2006, 10:14 PM
Yosai, darling, I can only say again how much I LOVE your art. It\'s so elegant. *siiigh* I\'ll agree with Zombi on the fight, though. Aside from that, the only thing that I\'d suggest is having someone read over your english? I dunno, maybe I\'m just too picky on that. >_> (English Majors are such a pain, neh?)
Rax, man... Sad face, man. Just sad face.
Rax, man... Sad face, man. Just sad face.
# 8
Posted:
Oct 17 2006, 09:38 PM
man yosai. that was really deep. i loved it.
the art could have been a bit more clear in the fight scenes though. i dont know what cut her. other than that, i liked it.
you could have also used one or two establishing shots for Sol.
but its such a nice fight that it doesnt matter anymore
the art could have been a bit more clear in the fight scenes though. i dont know what cut her. other than that, i liked it.
you could have also used one or two establishing shots for Sol.
but its such a nice fight that it doesnt matter anymore
# 7
Posted:
Oct 17 2006, 09:21 PM
um. I dunno what to say, really ^^;
the last time I had my entry almost finished but --well-- things happened and I couldn\'t submit it. by then we were talking about rechallenging but had Danielle tourney stuff so I asked Rax if he could wait until danielle\'s due..
um. yeah, so I rechallenged after done with Danielle entry. this is my way to (somehow) make up for the disappointment in the last default though >_>;
the last time I had my entry almost finished but --well-- things happened and I couldn\'t submit it. by then we were talking about rechallenging but had Danielle tourney stuff so I asked Rax if he could wait until danielle\'s due..
um. yeah, so I rechallenged after done with Danielle entry. this is my way to (somehow) make up for the disappointment in the last default though >_>;
# 6
Posted:
Oct 17 2006, 09:00 PM
Yosai! That page #4 was awesome, yo! I didn\'t really understood the story though...but, the art is good as usual.
Sol- Better luck next time, man.
Sol- Better luck next time, man.
# 5
Posted:
Oct 17 2006, 11:49 AM
yall havent been posting any kinda feed back so hopefully ya didnt default again. . .
# 4
Posted:
Oct 14 2006, 03:28 PM
Tasteful. Hopefully time\'ll work out this time.
# 3
Posted:
Oct 10 2006, 04:50 PM
heads will roll if this defaults again
# 2
Posted:
Oct 10 2006, 01:21 AM
nice a rematch good luck
# 1
Posted:
Oct 9 2006, 08:24 PM
yyeessssss~!
i hope things work out better this time X3;
i hope things work out better this time X3;
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
1 week
Ended:
Oct 24th, 2006
Votes Cast:
59
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1740
Winner:
Yosai
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