Oh interesting! for one week thats pretty cool stuff!
orion: that use of limited colors worked quiet well. actually that was quiet nice all in all but also a little... out of context. Admiteddly i am not too big of a fan for standalone comics or stuff without a bigger narrative but one week is not too much to plan something. It would have been nice just to know how spoiler ended in hell. aside from that aspect it was a good show.
cy: good show here too! I like the sacrifycing dymamic but would also like to see wyrm doing more tbh. also maybe consider putting more in a single page. i was flipping through these 5 pages and was a bit bummed it was already over cause i thought i am at pg.3.
you both did really good for 1 week
▲Cult Classic▽ / Spoiler vs. The Great and Almighty Wyrm
Critiques & Comments
# 8
Posted:
Oct 24 2020, 01:43 AM
# 7
Posted:
Oct 22 2020, 06:16 PM
Thanks for the comments so far! Just wanted to say Putrid, this was actually a 24 hour battle We prob should have put it in the title hahah
# 6
Posted:
Oct 22 2020, 04:41 PM
Orion:
Really liked the first shot of the building! The setup is very nice, altho sometimes the backgrounds fell a little flat. I know you only had a week to dish this out so I won't go too into it. The final panel was so goood! Really liked the pacing and the humor
Cy:
I had to go back and read about Wyrm's death to get what was going on, but I rly liked how it was predicted and how we got to see some f Wyrm's arrogance!
Really liked the first shot of the building! The setup is very nice, altho sometimes the backgrounds fell a little flat. I know you only had a week to dish this out so I won't go too into it. The final panel was so goood! Really liked the pacing and the humor
Cy:
I had to go back and read about Wyrm's death to get what was going on, but I rly liked how it was predicted and how we got to see some f Wyrm's arrogance!
# 5
Posted:
Oct 19 2020, 11:53 AM
Orion: That office building in hell looks amazing. I love the color scheme you stick to for these!
Cy: I haven't gotten to see much of the Almighty Worm before, but I enjoyed its tantrum and how they
just yeets the ball away.
Cy: I haven't gotten to see much of the Almighty Worm before, but I enjoyed its tantrum and how they
just yeets the ball away.
# 4
Posted:
Oct 19 2020, 06:43 AM
Orion: Your continued deep dive into more experimental pagelayout and angles is paying off big time for me. Your panel flow remains natural and readable, your style is slowly manifesting. I really want you to keep up doing these bigs, twisty panel layouts., the payout with the Whyrms size being so menacingly displayed was good. Keep it up.
Cy: I love the way this is set before Wyrms death, I wasn't sure what your hook was gonna be, but actually using the eightball for what it is should honestly had been my first thought haha. I know you had various issues, so I wont talk to much about the art. Especially since I have seen how clean you can be given time and proper work environment. the giant triangle panels "Sphere gradient" felt out of place however.
Cy: I love the way this is set before Wyrms death, I wasn't sure what your hook was gonna be, but actually using the eightball for what it is should honestly had been my first thought haha. I know you had various issues, so I wont talk to much about the art. Especially since I have seen how clean you can be given time and proper work environment. the giant triangle panels "Sphere gradient" felt out of place however.
# 3
Posted:
Oct 19 2020, 02:04 AM
Orion- I was sort of confused on the story on yours, but it was still a fun read. The building in the first page was very ambitious, and I liked the GoA Wyrm showing up outside the building at the end.
Cy- I enjoyed your story, and like how we got to see the GoA Wyrm's haughty personality! I also enjoyed the nod to his previous comics! The mind altering effects were really fun to look at!
Cy- I enjoyed your story, and like how we got to see the GoA Wyrm's haughty personality! I also enjoyed the nod to his previous comics! The mind altering effects were really fun to look at!
# 2
Posted:
Oct 19 2020, 12:07 AM
Annnd in like the Flin!
Sorry about the compy troubles. That sort of stuff sneaks up at the worst time on fights like these but I can't wait to see what you got!
EDIT:
HA! Such the drama God!
Nice expressive movements from Wyrm. Can really get him hamming it up as well as him doing his "godding" which we didn't get to before.
Thanks for the 3peat of a battle! You're characters are a lot of fun and though Wyrm didn't end up in here as much as I would have liked I still love your big danger noodle!
Sorry about the compy troubles. That sort of stuff sneaks up at the worst time on fights like these but I can't wait to see what you got!
EDIT:
HA! Such the drama God!
Nice expressive movements from Wyrm. Can really get him hamming it up as well as him doing his "godding" which we didn't get to before.
Thanks for the 3peat of a battle! You're characters are a lot of fun and though Wyrm didn't end up in here as much as I would have liked I still love your big danger noodle!
# 1
Posted:
Oct 18 2020, 11:57 PM
So my computer chose the hour before the deadline to completely flip out, luckily I managed to upload my pages but there’s a few errors I noticed and just couldn’t fix Rip Wyrm’s arms in that one panel.
Regular Match
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1 week
Ended:
Oct 26th, 2020
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19
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TheCydork
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Really good job on both sides.
Orion: I like the experimental layouts and the limited colors. I'm not sure why but I don't like the devil guy, just feels a bit like an overplayed character type. but this could just be a nitpicky thing on my end.
Cy: I really like the whole set up for this taking place before SDT and the 5 pages done in one day is really amazing, Great job on this.