I didn't get a chance to comment when it first came out but this was a great read and I really enjoyed seeing the NDA universe pop up again Fantastic work everyone!

There's some really interesting ideas in here-- the concept of using scattered text as the environment is very creative and fittingly otherworldly (I noticed a good handful of void references in there, and there's probably more that I couldn't find). In terms of the dialogue I recommend finding an editor, there's a number of grammar mistakes and those can be pretty distracting. The use of color here also seems a little inconsistent (the screentone on page 4 is too strong, and is the only place where this is happening). I assume this wasn't a deadline issue as a BB, if it was then disregard-- but for comics with partial color like this one, the choice of which pages are colored should be very purposefully picked to have the most impact or communicate something with the audience, such as only coloring present day scenes and leaving flashbacks in grayscale, for example. As it is, I'm not really sure why only pages 3 and 4 were chosen to have full color.

Overall you guys did really well on this, it's a good story with some pretty creative elements. Keep it up, I'm always glad to see more NDA!

This is SUPER AWESOME CAB!!!!!!! 😊

owo what's this?

Ooooh colour me intrigued!