A Prayer Wheel Companion

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beardedMenace
Artist

55 comments

# 12 Posted: Oct 23 2010, 07:16 AM

Pretty extreme for a buddhist monk! Nice little story, love the little touches like the gibberish speech. Great work, especially for a 24hour deal!

alberto311
Artist

374 comments

# 11 Posted: Oct 20 2010, 09:14 AM

Good Job... it has a european style to it... more like the french comics i guess.

Aluísio C. Santos
Artist

735 comments

# 10 Posted: Oct 20 2010, 07:12 AM

Wow! This is one of the best 24 hour comics I've ever seen.

I realllly like the panel-popping sound fx! (also wish they were explored more too!)

michaelharris
Artist

353 comments

# 9 Posted: Oct 19 2010, 07:58 AM

I really really really want you to start using perspective. IF you just learn it well enough, it would even improve your structures when you fake them. The quality did degrade a bit as the comic went on. I loved the characterization and the style that the characters had. The story flows well and the pacing is good. I also got confused as to who was who at the end.

Thanks!

Iketeruguy
Artist

220 comments

# 8 Posted: Oct 19 2010, 05:38 AM

Gabriel Bautista: thanks amigos for the kind words!

yah those last few pages i was totally falling asleep and inking while sleeping haha-- at one point i remember lettering a dialogue box with random words-- a grueling task i cant wait to tackle again!

the color version (if i ever do it) will make things much easier to read!

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That's hilarious and awesome.

galvo
Artist

146 comments

# 7 Posted: Oct 18 2010, 09:02 PM

Kevin Birtcher:
My only source of confusion was in the fight at the end. I couldn't tell which guy was which easily...
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It's hard to tell during the fight, but you can tell who won by the names on the jackets. Harrell = first guy, Nolan = second guy. I also noticed a drop in detail around there, so he was probably starting to run outta juice and/or time.

Still though, good stuff.

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thanks amigos for the kind words!

yah those last few pages i was totally falling asleep and inking while sleeping haha-- at one point i remember lettering a dialogue box with random words-- a grueling task i cant wait to tackle again!

the color version (if i ever do it) will make things much easier to read!

Kevin Birtcher
Allfather

289 comments

# 6 Posted: Oct 18 2010, 08:46 PM

My only source of confusion was in the fight at the end. I couldn't tell which guy was which easily...

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It's hard to tell during the fight, but you can tell who won by the names on the jackets. Harrell = first guy, Nolan = second guy. I also noticed a drop in detail around there, so he was probably starting to run outta juice and/or time.

Still though, good stuff.

HAVEN!
Artist

51 comments

# 5 Posted: Oct 18 2010, 01:32 PM

i love the fact that it's told from the girls point of view, and she cant understand english. that's awesome.

Iketeruguy
Artist

220 comments

# 4 Posted: Oct 18 2010, 12:43 PM

Great work, Galvo. Excellent story telling. My only source of confusion was in the fight at the end. I couldn't tell which guy was which easily, but I'm not sure if that was how you intended it or not. I enjoyed it a lot.

E.W. Schneider
Artist

1070 comments

# 3 Posted: Oct 18 2010, 10:18 AM

Another addition to our 24 hour comics? Awesome! I'll have to add this to the list.

This looks phenom by the way.

luniara
Artist

528 comments

# 2 Posted: Oct 18 2010, 07:11 AM

see, if you did this with all the comics you knock out, I would be thankful and dance naked in honor of you.

Rtv!
Artist

603 comments

# 1 Posted: Oct 18 2010, 02:55 AM

FATHER??! You have returned!

Images aren''t working beyond fifth page. But that's prolly got something to do with the restrictions on the comp at work.
But looks very tight! Can't wait to get home and fully check it out.