\'whew\'

Kitori lovely Kitori, yes very sketchy but you\'ve already set a bar in your intro comic. Surpass it next time and from then on. You knew it was lacking but i\'m sure you also knew it was not your best after you posted it up that you wanted to do more. Next time you can and it will be awe inspiring-just don\'t hold anything back. Enlarge your text a little so it\'s easier to read. Also try to have your opposing charaters get gradually more seduced or more attentive to Kitori in your future stories, I mean she is a succubus there driven by lust. Now i don\'t want a porno comic BUT there will always be some hormone driven dumbass that would want to sleep with the first peice of ass he sees, and if that peice of ass might have to Kitori. As a reader i\'ll feel really bad for that guy but love Kitori more for what she has in store for that guy...any way just throwin\' out some ideas. good shit.

Mize...ho...ly...shit. Your stuff is the shit and your colors holify it. First panel with the lighting that you used from the fire as the only source of light worked so well. Second panel with all the different emotions and expresions from each face show that you don\'t have a problem knowing how to tell your audience what each character is feeling. Third panel I don\'t know who that guy is but i want to know and the only way i\'ll find out is if I keep looking forward to and reading your stuff. BASTARD! Forth panel leaves me anticipating and yearning for more. I applaude and bow to you. YES! little action now entirley agreeable but...big action later makes up for everything. This is by far flawless story lineing to tie all your comics. I hope, NAY! i\'m comfident that i will see these similar skills and talent used for Armaggedon.

and I agree with Kura X...Fully.

No one diserves to say that they\'re the best. The best at mopping a floor, snapping their fingers, or picking there nose, yeah sure but, the best at art? WTF! Everyone who does art and every single person on this site has the potential to get better and better and better every day. Whether you\'re joking or not how dare you say that. Please show me that you are the best please I beg of you cuz if you don\'t the time you post up anything related to your character you\'re gonna get a critique so long it\'ll make you go blind because you\'re spending so much time on your pc just trying to read it. If you wanna see the best look up Alex Ross cuz he\'s pretty damn close. If your stuff is anything similar I take everything back. Which i\'m sure I won\'t have to.

I just wanna say I haven\'t even read your comic yet Mize. And I\'ll tell you why. I saw that there was color in your art. And... I gotta admit. I had to go to the bathroom and clean up. Now hopefully I can comfortably enjoy this on going geniusly (in a way improvised) series with whatever story you\'ve come up with next...Yeah...i\'m so a fan it\'s pathetic.Here it goes...

GVATK: apparantly, you\'re also still a retard.

uhh,... mamoru is SICK! those r skills if ive ever seen \'em. mize is definately bad-ass! excellent quality,...EXCELLENT!

wow mize i wouldhave to say that u are truely amazing, up to 5 fights at once and still found the time to finish and damn near win all of  them. great work and nice story hope we can do battle sometime!!! =D

Nice battle both of you
Kotori i would have liked to see more and some color because I saw your other stuff and i don\'t feel that this battle show how capable you actually are when it comes to art

Mamorou is still my favorite centipede
centipede because he must have multiple hands to do all that art and school..Good colors and
good  story development  Please  Actually illustrate Kate being rescued instead of your next comic having her Just be there....and i\'m all out of  suggestions

Not a whole lot going on in either but at least there\'s some decent story elements going on.  Looks good Mamoru, looking forward to ours.

bambi...

Kotori - decently funny battle, but the sketchiness combined with small text made it difficult to enjoy your comic. bigger images next time, please.

Mamoru - Love the colors as usual, but I guess I\'m a little saddened at the lack of action in this fight. The plot advancement was cool, but there wasn\'t a lot in the entertainment category other than your awesome art skills.

Battle is in. Sorry it\'s so... sketchy, but it\'s fun. Can\'t wait to see your\'s, Mamoru!

no wait, someone bigger than lotus, nevermind. (Viridius)

he meant Lotus.

I fail to understand the above comment... But aside from that...

I can\'t wait for the fight, Mamoru! I can\'t wait to see what will come of it. Thanks for accepting.

Fuckin aye, seriously now, you gotta huge potted plant to fight Mamo*