As Above, So Below / Resnick vs. Serath Klodus

As Above, So Below — Resnick vs. Serath Klodus

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48.3%
114 points

Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques

I wanted to do a lot more, even for a 24 hour, but I am happy with the experimental outlines here. Hope you like what I'm offering!

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51.7%
122 points

Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques

this was a buckwild ride and I definitely didn't get to do everything I wanted to, but I was at least able to get the majority of it out. I would definitely be down for a rematch in the future, hopefully with a longer deadline!

tags: Alien, cw blood, cw eye trauma, cw gore, demon, resnick, serath klodus

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kubo
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167 comments

# 2 Posted: Dec 27 2023, 08:44 PM

Awe, man! They killed Matholomew. He was my favorite character. Good job, both of you.

STEALREHN - I liked how to tackled the theme of the comic, but I would have liked a little more contrast in the characters and background. I think an easy way of doing that would be to keep them color coordinated but filled them in a lighter version of their color. You wouldn't need to shade or anything more, but it would help show off the details you already put into each panel.

BATTY - I liked your story here. Nice and simple. If the texture was intensional then ignore this: if you knock up the contrast more after scanning your pages I think it will bring clarity of your work will and show off the cool character designs you and expressions you are able to display in the comics. I really enjoy that part of your art.