Monster Maker Round 3 / "Moth" vs. Julian vs. Tarkos

Monster Maker Round 3 — "Moth" vs. Julian vs. Tarkos

by DoeFr

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266 points
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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
Finals kicked my ass, unfortunately. I'll render the rest of the comic later.
tags: body horror, gore, julian, moth, tarkos


by Badger

This comic has been rated suitable for teens and up by its creator(s)

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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
cw: body horror elements, semi-realistic organs
Thank you for reading!
tags: julian, monster maker 2023, moth, scar match, tarkos


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Crit level: No critique desired, comments encouraged
I'm sorry to my opponents for not being able to deliver a fully polished comic. I had to use a 24 hr battle to break out from an art rut.
It might not be clear, but the scar on Julian was growing demon horns, and Moth was becoming more insect like.
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Bobert
Artist
250 comments
# 4   Posted: Dec 21 2023, 12:43 AM
These were good comics and I wish I had more to say in greater detail but I've been so exhausted and busy by junk that besides congratulating Badger all I can muster is condolences for life getting in the way for Fluff and Doe.

RanZombie
Artist
26 comments
# 3   Posted: Dec 16 2023, 11:22 PM
Excellent job throughout all the tournament ya'll!
I made sure to keep track of every round and all of you definitely earned the right to stand at the top.
it's a shame that in the final stretch there were complications and two were unable to finish their entry, but even what's there has a lot of meat to chew on.

Doefr:
Despite lacking the great colors from previous entries, inks alone was good enough to deliver the message and show just how messed up Moth can leave its opponents. As with previous entries, the end result was really inventive and I did enjoy her arc from rejecting everyone to eventually trying to seek help from others. All in all, I know Moth has left quite the mark on its opponents and readers alike.

Badger:
It is beyond me how you're capable of delivering such a consistent level of polish and also length to your entries in such a small amount of time. Clearly witchcraft of some sort. I do feel there's some potential themes that could've explored, but what story is there is still enjoyable and good enough to carry our interest for Julian forward.
I've been a big fan of your work since I entered the site and you have never disappointed! If you end up winning it will be a very well earned victory!

Fluffsamasprime:
If I ever need help writing a devious bastard, I know you're the person to call. It's clear you had a lot of fun developing Tarkos into quite the shady salesman, but also a force to be feared. Even so, I liked a lot that things didn't always go his way but just somehow found the way to get the upper hand. I find those type of scenarios to be super engaging and can really make up for other aspects of the comic that might not be as polished. I'll definitely keep an eye out for this guy in the future.  

Fluffsamasprime
Artist
570 comments
# 2   Posted: Dec 13 2023, 01:35 AM
I feel terrible being unable to finish my side.

Doe you went wild with the scars! The lil tarkos gremlin butteryfly was was a fun idea. The more insect like eyes for Juilan reminded me of those snail eye salk parasite. Very sick!

Badgeryou went hard this whole tournament. Giving your opponents intense comcis, and creative scars that had me excited to see what you would come up with for the next round. Keeping in mind their own stories/ personalities and entertwining them wit yours.

Radji
Artist
624 comments
# 1   Posted: Dec 10 2023, 12:56 PM
Very nice! I just love three ways battles...

Fluff: I would have loved to see this finished. That say, your ideas for scars were also fun.

Badger: the most narration heavy entry, very good art as always, fun scars

Doefr: your run was my personal favorite, I just love insects and body horror. Fun scars, nice narration.

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Scar Match
Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Dec 16th, 2023
Votes Cast: 12
Page Views: 454
Winner: Badger
 

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