Julz: Well worth the time and effort coloring, these pages are really easy on the eyes. I'm not big on the silly ex machina ending, but in a 1-weeker, ya gotta end it somehow. My favorite part was thinking the silhouette of the crane driver on page 3 looked oddly horsey, then turning the page and seeing that mask. Great detail, it would've been easy to just black out the crane window or do a generic reflection at that small scale. Also, I'm just gonna say it, Clash is lookin' fine in those gym clothes. What is she, like a 15 year old robot? I'm goin' to hell? Tsk.
Sixtem: I love the setting, and the dialogue on page 1 really drew me in, great writing. Your action in the following two pages is slick, although I might've liked to see an indication of the first two dead guards in the foreground of page 3, panel 1. It's clear enough that he cut them in two, but seeing a little of them in the next panel would help smooth the panel jump a little. As always, I love how legit your black and white pages look. Even while these are clearly a little sketchy, they read perfectly. It's too bad this duo's run at resurrection ends here, because I wanted to see more. Not just of this comic, but Clash and Pistol comics. Here's hoping for some Beyond Battles.
Speed Resurrection Tournament 2015: Round 3 / Clash and Pistol vs. Doctor Princess
Critiques & Comments
# 5
Posted:
Jul 10 2015, 04:14 PM
# 4
Posted:
Jul 8 2015, 11:03 PM
It was super down to the wire with the coloring- like colored until 3 minutes til turn in. But it's colored. Submitted whoo boy. Had like no time ever for this!!
# 3
Posted:
Jul 8 2015, 03:15 PM
Big apology to Julz! I totally flubbed this one. I got distracted by personal work, commissions, and vidya so all I have to turn in is a few sketchy pages.
Basically, blame me and my inability to manage time this week.
Basically, blame me and my inability to manage time this week.
# 2
Posted:
Jul 1 2015, 12:39 PM
This is all going to be medically unsound.
I CANT WAIT
I CANT WAIT
# 1
Posted:
Jul 1 2015, 11:05 AM
No blood in a stone, Dr Princess!! haha, cant wait to see what you guys make of this!
Speed Resurrection Tournament Match
Drawing Time:
1 week
Ended:
Jul 15th, 2015
Votes Cast:
16
Page Views:
1755
Winner:
Julz
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Julz- whoa these are pretty! But the content.... Really disappoints. I didnt find it funny at all, jokes felt really forced for me. Boo.