I think Todd is WAY too forgiving in his side, but I guess he's just a nice person like that.
Quote from: snager
with the bio claiming Todd to be a grumpy edgelord I expected a more conflicted reaction towards Wallace vs immediate attempt to aid.
Quote from: PyrasTerran
His bio states, "He’s perpetually grumpy and tired, but he has a good heart and just wants to fix the problems he’s caused.". Todd perceives the situation as his fault, given that Strigoi transformed and went rogue due to his curse. Also, I know the bar for human decency is Void is pretty low, but I'd like people to stop and think for a second about the position Todd's in. A man has had a whole arm ripped off in front of him, because of him, and is now dying. I would imagine most normal people would offer aid?
Also, I think Todd has his professional face on? Because his personality felt pretty toned down compared to the bio- wheres my angsty, grumpy lad?
Quote from: Flytee
This is correct haha, the pain tempered him a lot as well. You're gonna be seeing a lot more of his usual personality in Round 2
Artist
Kubo - Script, thumbs, inks, flats
Inky - monster design, sketches, colors
Cy/Badger - Its funny how we both came up with similar plot hooks for our stories. Starting us off with Wallace going over the numerous tests that the company has already done with Strigoi was a good idea. It helped build tension once Todd arrives and we all know that Wallace must be lying for his reason for calling the exorcist. Overall, the art for the comic is consistent. You have a lot of fun dynamic shots, however I think the inking was a bit too simple in places. I would have loved to see some spot blacks inside that creepy cabin, especially around Strigoi before her full reveal (page 5 is a really good example of some sweet spot blacks). Coloring was good, I really liked page 9 and wished there was a bit of the in page 10, specifically in the first panel where Wallace is still firing off his gun out of view. Some reflected light there would have been really cool. We gave you a TON of stuff to work with for Strigoi so I can understand it being overwhelming. I think in general you did a good job of portraying Strigoi and Wallace without previous comics to go off of, though I was a bit confused about the stake as Strigoi is a vampire in name only, though you could interpret that as Todd making a wrong assumption but using the right magic anyway. With that being said, I want to congratulate both of you on delivering a fun and winning comic. I'm excited to fight/team-up with you both in the future.