I like how the mood goes from dark to light.
The art could be better; just like mine but over all I think you were more out to have a little fun. And this worked well here. I think story development and Streaming your art could work well together. But I would put a splash page in every series, just to keep people reminded of what your capable of. But I\'m not you so...

 Good freelance there.

That was a great comic Kate and a great laugh I needed it, God bless you.  Good story, good humor, good pacing. Can\'t wait to see more.

*LHAO* Oh, I love the third page. Your sense of humor kills me, Kate. XD

Have I ever told you how adorable Kate is?  I just wanna huggle her to death.  I love the panel with her head popping up from behind the couch.

that third page still has me laughing. again love your sense of plot development with each battle, gives void that much more sense of community.

A follow-up to the outcome of the battle with Kotori, delving into the \"deal\" that was mentioned in the end.