Intro Story / Dr. Wilhelm Blight
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# 7
Posted:
Oct 11 2011, 06:26 PM
awesome stuff dude!!
# 6
Posted:
Oct 11 2011, 11:37 AM
Brian: ... I would have given you a perfect score, save for two flaws: First, falling back on the old therapist cliches. German accent is fine, but the couch and "tell me about your mother" lessened my excitement. It's such an old trope, I'd rather see it done away with entirely.
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Brian: The second, and more important, issue I had were the final panels. The sudden shift to complete and total darkness confused me at first. I wasn't entirely sure if the doctor was still in the office or what- something to establish where the sudden darkness came from would have helped avoid any such confusion.
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# 5
Posted:
Oct 10 2011, 07:00 PM
Your inks were absolutely wonderful, and the twist was quite surprising. I would have given you a perfect score, save for two flaws: First, falling back on the old therapist cliches. German accent is fine, but the couch and "tell me about your mother" lessened my excitement. It's such an old trope, I'd rather see it done away with entirely. The second, and more important, issue I had were the final panels. The sudden shift to complete and total darkness confused me at first. I wasn't entirely sure if the doctor was still in the office or what- something to establish where the sudden darkness came from would have helped avoid any such confusion. Nevertheless, I'm looking forward to seeing this character fight. Keep up the absolutely stunning work.
# 4
Posted:
Oct 10 2011, 06:47 PM
! ! ! !
# 3
Posted:
Oct 10 2011, 06:12 PM
awesome! Thank you again for helping my motivation, you've got some amazing work here :]
# 2
Posted:
Oct 10 2011, 03:29 PM
Frick man, you make a tempting target... and a daunting opponent. XD welcome to void. impact is imminent X3
# 1
Posted:
Oct 10 2011, 10:53 AM
Fuck Yes.
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Those inks, angles,blacks and backgrounds are fukking amazing. I like this guy already.
The shape of his head in particular. It'd be an honor to battle you someday.
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