Massive Attack vs. Swallow

Massive Attack vs. Swallow

Massive Attack vs. Swallow

by Kon

50.2%
422 points
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Crit level: No preference

by Craqued

49.8%
419 points
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Crit level: No preference



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BornLoser
Artist
53 comments
# 23   Posted: Sep 21 2008, 07:51 AM
I liked them both. Kons alittle more for the art.  Craqueds alittle more for the story. Overall i gave craqueds alittle higher score (yeah im writing this comment like a week or two later, i know :P)

Kon: Good improvement since the last battle.

amazingdavid
Artist
441 comments
# 22   Posted: Sep 20 2008, 12:28 AM
Okay...maybe I\'m stupid...but I don\'t get either of these stories.  I like alternative comics, and experimental narrative and stretching the boundaries of how to tell a story.....

but yeah I don\'t get it


besides that however...the illsutrations from both of you two.  they pretty much make me all moist and wet.  Especially Kon you pretty much illustrate with a looseness and intuitiveness that  I wish I had. I especially liked the pages with just little bits of color....

Craqued I also dig your cartooning....good pacing and control of the media.  I hope to see more from both of you

michaelharris
Artist
352 comments
# 21   Posted: Sep 16 2008, 12:59 PM
Kon, I was kinda confused by the story and, in parts, the art. I think your art is steadily improving and I think you should try to make your backgrounds more ledgible

Craqued, I wish this was a little neater. I wish the quality was more consistant throughout the whole thing(well that could go for both...) other than that it was enjoyable.

Kon
Artist
194 comments
# 20   Posted: Sep 16 2008, 11:57 AM
Ronin> MA IS IN BAD STAR. THanks for liking my dark side because I really enjoyed drawing some wierd stuff, hope that you\'ll like my next battle and next and next battle until I fight you again with extra cool skills!
Thank you for seeing the improvment, I also think it\'s better than the older one.

Jho> Thanks lovely girl, also I\'m gonna try doing less confusing story\'s and to manage my time better so I don\'t need to rush the end. Trying to use lightsource for my battle against Bub and gonna try different angles than front view too. Glad you enjoyed it more than the first one :)

Jess> I guess it is a bit confusing, hope you\'ll get the second part so you can understand the first one more!

Mike> Thanks Mike, I look for any crowd since any kind of people is gonna read this! I hope you\'ll read our next battles thought :)

Rone Rivendale
Artist
89 comments
# 19   Posted: Sep 13 2008, 12:08 PM
I just didn\'t \'get\' either of these. So I had to rate these solely on eye candy and the ablilty to keep me reading.

Kon\'s was a little better artistically and I read it all the way through. Craqued, sorry but I don\'t like your art style at all and I didn\'t finish it.

I think I\'m just not the crowd you two are looking for. I\'m not into the whole let\'s be as crass as possible to get a laugh thing.

Betito
Artist
104 comments
# 18   Posted: Sep 13 2008, 11:46 AM
Good work Kon!  I really like this

Rocul
15 comments
# 17   Posted: Sep 11 2008, 03:48 AM
Kon, well... I didn\'t really understand the story... do forgive me but everything just confused me.

Craque, I love it. So dark and so alluring, I love the style, and the crooked panels just adds to everything. The story is just fantastic. ABSOLUTELY.

ronin-soul
Artist
81 comments
# 16   Posted: Sep 10 2008, 12:44 PM
AHSUM BATTLE!

Kon- Woohoo, little cameo by Ronin. I like how you slowed down the pacing since the last one which was the main thing I thought you could improve on. Good art, as usual, looks really nice- you should try some traditional coloring methods, that would be tight with your lines.  A little confusing, but I got the gist of the story. Besides those 2 things, I really liked the darkness going on with the nudity and the nazi stuff going on, it fits well with your style. Good battle, Kon- I can already see some improvement going on here.

P.S.-M.A. should be in Badstar, that would be super cool.

Craqued- Nice little story here. Was dark, but the same time, it had a little bit of whimsy in it with the narrative style. Your art was awesome, but if you spent some time on some of the sketchier panels, it would have been that much better. When you add all of the little details and whatnot, your stuff looks super professional, so try doing that on each page if you get the time. Other than that, cool side of the battle, I\'m looking forward to fighting by Swallow in Badstar!




jho
Artist
485 comments
# 15   Posted: Sep 10 2008, 10:29 AM
aw man craqued, that was precious :( i really like what you have up. too bad it\'s not finished eh? it has this eerie feel to it, awesome i realy like the way you potray the characters too.

kon that was cool tho the vagina dentata totally surprised me hahahaha, you might wanna watch your anatomy and maybe different angle than just facefront. the flow gets kinda confusing but the color helped.

Kon
Artist
194 comments
# 14   Posted: Sep 10 2008, 09:20 AM
Craqued I loved your part! You draw Massive Attack so well and he looked kinda cool and deadly. Also even if the last two pages where rushed it was WAY above me. WAY ABOVE.
This was so cute, I\'m gonna cry now. CRY.

Anyway, I liked the story a lot, it wasn\'t as confusing as mine, I liked the way they met and how he killed everybody in the room, it was really nice.
I enjoyed this so much! THANK YOU.

Craqued
Artist
202 comments
# 13   Posted: Sep 10 2008, 08:39 AM
OH KONS that was bloody cute, swallow was adorably disturbing haha. MY part coulda been so much better, I\'m sorry, time and unforeseen occurrence, ya know? IT WAS FUN THOUGH, thanks bro!!!

Aluísio C. Santos
Artist
735 comments
# 12   Posted: Sep 10 2008, 07:12 AM
WOAWOAWAO

Kon
Artist
194 comments
# 11   Posted: Sep 10 2008, 07:08 AM
I uploaded!

Kumaru
Artist
87 comments
# 10   Posted: Sep 9 2008, 05:30 PM
GO GUYS GO GO GO!!

Puzzlething
Artist
457 comments
# 9   Posted: Sep 3 2008, 07:53 PM
YEEAAAAAAH, KICK SOME ASS!

Kon
Artist
194 comments
# 8   Posted: Sep 2 2008, 03:03 AM
YOU KNOW WHAT IS NIIIIICEE?!!!

Kumaru
Artist
87 comments
# 7   Posted: Sep 1 2008, 06:32 PM
NIIIICEE!!!!

Craqued
Artist
202 comments
# 6   Posted: Aug 26 2008, 10:15 PM
IMA COMIN FOR YA KID

Airlight
Artist
136 comments
# 5   Posted: Aug 26 2008, 08:02 PM
OH YEAHHHHHH.

BEAT THE FRENCH BREAD OUT OF THE FRENCHIE, SLOANE

PUNCH THE HAWAIIAN PUNCH OUT OF THE HAWAIIAN, KON

ronin-soul
Artist
81 comments
# 4   Posted: Aug 26 2008, 07:45 PM
ME LIKEY. Own this shit up guys.

Dimension
Artist
489 comments
# 3   Posted: Aug 26 2008, 12:31 PM
wel,l well, well...

good luck guys! :3

Kon
Artist
194 comments
# 2   Posted: Aug 26 2008, 10:58 AM
WOA WOA WOAAAAAA

Aluísio C. Santos
Artist
735 comments
# 1   Posted: Aug 26 2008, 08:46 AM
WAHOOOOOO

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Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Sep 16th, 2008
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