Okay...maybe I\'m stupid...but I don\'t get either of these stories. I like alternative comics, and experimental narrative and stretching the boundaries of how to tell a story.....
but yeah I don\'t get it
besides that however...the illsutrations from both of you two. they pretty much make me all moist and wet. Especially Kon you pretty much illustrate with a looseness and intuitiveness that I wish I had. I especially liked the pages with just little bits of color....
Craqued I also dig your cartooning....good pacing and control of the media. I hope to see more from both of you
Massive Attack vs. Swallow
Critiques & Comments
# 22
Posted:
Sep 20 2008, 12:28 AM
# 21
Posted:
Sep 16 2008, 12:59 PM
Kon, I was kinda confused by the story and, in parts, the art. I think your art is steadily improving and I think you should try to make your backgrounds more ledgible
Craqued, I wish this was a little neater. I wish the quality was more consistant throughout the whole thing(well that could go for both...) other than that it was enjoyable.
Craqued, I wish this was a little neater. I wish the quality was more consistant throughout the whole thing(well that could go for both...) other than that it was enjoyable.
# 20
Posted:
Sep 16 2008, 11:57 AM
Ronin> MA IS IN BAD STAR. THanks for liking my dark side because I really enjoyed drawing some wierd stuff, hope that you\'ll like my next battle and next and next battle until I fight you again with extra cool skills!
Thank you for seeing the improvment, I also think it\'s better than the older one.
Jho> Thanks lovely girl, also I\'m gonna try doing less confusing story\'s and to manage my time better so I don\'t need to rush the end. Trying to use lightsource for my battle against Bub and gonna try different angles than front view too. Glad you enjoyed it more than the first one
Jess> I guess it is a bit confusing, hope you\'ll get the second part so you can understand the first one more!
Mike> Thanks Mike, I look for any crowd since any kind of people is gonna read this! I hope you\'ll read our next battles thought
Thank you for seeing the improvment, I also think it\'s better than the older one.
Jho> Thanks lovely girl, also I\'m gonna try doing less confusing story\'s and to manage my time better so I don\'t need to rush the end. Trying to use lightsource for my battle against Bub and gonna try different angles than front view too. Glad you enjoyed it more than the first one
Jess> I guess it is a bit confusing, hope you\'ll get the second part so you can understand the first one more!
Mike> Thanks Mike, I look for any crowd since any kind of people is gonna read this! I hope you\'ll read our next battles thought
# 19
Posted:
Sep 13 2008, 12:08 PM
I just didn\'t \'get\' either of these. So I had to rate these solely on eye candy and the ablilty to keep me reading.
Kon\'s was a little better artistically and I read it all the way through. Craqued, sorry but I don\'t like your art style at all and I didn\'t finish it.
I think I\'m just not the crowd you two are looking for. I\'m not into the whole let\'s be as crass as possible to get a laugh thing.
Kon\'s was a little better artistically and I read it all the way through. Craqued, sorry but I don\'t like your art style at all and I didn\'t finish it.
I think I\'m just not the crowd you two are looking for. I\'m not into the whole let\'s be as crass as possible to get a laugh thing.
# 18
Posted:
Sep 13 2008, 11:46 AM
Good work Kon! I really like this
# 17
Posted:
Sep 11 2008, 03:48 AM
Kon, well... I didn\'t really understand the story... do forgive me but everything just confused me.
Craque, I love it. So dark and so alluring, I love the style, and the crooked panels just adds to everything. The story is just fantastic. ABSOLUTELY.
Craque, I love it. So dark and so alluring, I love the style, and the crooked panels just adds to everything. The story is just fantastic. ABSOLUTELY.
# 16
Posted:
Sep 10 2008, 12:44 PM
AHSUM BATTLE!
Kon- Woohoo, little cameo by Ronin. I like how you slowed down the pacing since the last one which was the main thing I thought you could improve on. Good art, as usual, looks really nice- you should try some traditional coloring methods, that would be tight with your lines. A little confusing, but I got the gist of the story. Besides those 2 things, I really liked the darkness going on with the nudity and the nazi stuff going on, it fits well with your style. Good battle, Kon- I can already see some improvement going on here.
P.S.-M.A. should be in Badstar, that would be super cool.
Craqued- Nice little story here. Was dark, but the same time, it had a little bit of whimsy in it with the narrative style. Your art was awesome, but if you spent some time on some of the sketchier panels, it would have been that much better. When you add all of the little details and whatnot, your stuff looks super professional, so try doing that on each page if you get the time. Other than that, cool side of the battle, I\'m looking forward to fighting by Swallow in Badstar!
Kon- Woohoo, little cameo by Ronin. I like how you slowed down the pacing since the last one which was the main thing I thought you could improve on. Good art, as usual, looks really nice- you should try some traditional coloring methods, that would be tight with your lines. A little confusing, but I got the gist of the story. Besides those 2 things, I really liked the darkness going on with the nudity and the nazi stuff going on, it fits well with your style. Good battle, Kon- I can already see some improvement going on here.
P.S.-M.A. should be in Badstar, that would be super cool.
Craqued- Nice little story here. Was dark, but the same time, it had a little bit of whimsy in it with the narrative style. Your art was awesome, but if you spent some time on some of the sketchier panels, it would have been that much better. When you add all of the little details and whatnot, your stuff looks super professional, so try doing that on each page if you get the time. Other than that, cool side of the battle, I\'m looking forward to fighting by Swallow in Badstar!
# 15
Posted:
Sep 10 2008, 10:29 AM
aw man craqued, that was precious i really like what you have up. too bad it\'s not finished eh? it has this eerie feel to it, awesome i realy like the way you potray the characters too.
kon that was cool tho the vagina dentata totally surprised me hahahaha, you might wanna watch your anatomy and maybe different angle than just facefront. the flow gets kinda confusing but the color helped.
kon that was cool tho the vagina dentata totally surprised me hahahaha, you might wanna watch your anatomy and maybe different angle than just facefront. the flow gets kinda confusing but the color helped.
# 14
Posted:
Sep 10 2008, 09:20 AM
Craqued I loved your part! You draw Massive Attack so well and he looked kinda cool and deadly. Also even if the last two pages where rushed it was WAY above me. WAY ABOVE.
This was so cute, I\'m gonna cry now. CRY.
Anyway, I liked the story a lot, it wasn\'t as confusing as mine, I liked the way they met and how he killed everybody in the room, it was really nice.
I enjoyed this so much! THANK YOU.
This was so cute, I\'m gonna cry now. CRY.
Anyway, I liked the story a lot, it wasn\'t as confusing as mine, I liked the way they met and how he killed everybody in the room, it was really nice.
I enjoyed this so much! THANK YOU.
# 13
Posted:
Sep 10 2008, 08:39 AM
OH KONS that was bloody cute, swallow was adorably disturbing haha. MY part coulda been so much better, I\'m sorry, time and unforeseen occurrence, ya know? IT WAS FUN THOUGH, thanks bro!!!
# 12
Posted:
Sep 10 2008, 07:12 AM
WOAWOAWAO
# 11
Posted:
Sep 10 2008, 07:08 AM
I uploaded!
# 10
Posted:
Sep 9 2008, 05:30 PM
GO GUYS GO GO GO!!
# 9
Posted:
Sep 3 2008, 07:53 PM
YEEAAAAAAH, KICK SOME ASS!
# 8
Posted:
Sep 2 2008, 03:03 AM
YOU KNOW WHAT IS NIIIIICEE?!!!
# 7
Posted:
Sep 1 2008, 06:32 PM
NIIIICEE!!!!
# 6
Posted:
Aug 26 2008, 10:15 PM
IMA COMIN FOR YA KID
# 5
Posted:
Aug 26 2008, 08:02 PM
OH YEAHHHHHH.
BEAT THE FRENCH BREAD OUT OF THE FRENCHIE, SLOANE
PUNCH THE HAWAIIAN PUNCH OUT OF THE HAWAIIAN, KON
BEAT THE FRENCH BREAD OUT OF THE FRENCHIE, SLOANE
PUNCH THE HAWAIIAN PUNCH OUT OF THE HAWAIIAN, KON
# 4
Posted:
Aug 26 2008, 07:45 PM
ME LIKEY. Own this shit up guys.
# 3
Posted:
Aug 26 2008, 12:31 PM
wel,l well, well...
good luck guys! :3
good luck guys! :3
# 2
Posted:
Aug 26 2008, 10:58 AM
WOA WOA WOAAAAAA
# 1
Posted:
Aug 26 2008, 08:46 AM
WAHOOOOOO
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
2 weeks
Ended:
Sep 16th, 2008
Votes Cast:
20
Page Views:
2175
Winner:
Kon
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Kon: Good improvement since the last battle.