Nightmare / Louise Ambre-Aliona and Holden Shark
Critiques & Comments
# 11
Posted:
Feb 5 2018, 05:35 PM
I really enjoy that this confronted a lot of what most of the parents of the spider kids would react with, I am curious how it is planned to be resolved though over all really dark and really fun!
# 10
Posted:
Feb 5 2018, 05:14 PM
Your art continues to improve as does your torment of poor Holden ;_; I like that the introduction of Liane gives us a slightly better understanding of why Louise is so terrifying to Holden but theres still a few puzzle pieces missing I hope you both fill us in one one day. and i think I better draw Lily giving her boyfriend a hug lol oh dear
# 9
Posted:
Feb 5 2018, 04:25 PM
Very nice little collab! Someone's gotta stop these spiders one day.
# 8
Posted:
Feb 5 2018, 03:35 PM
I'm gonna echo Zee and Sean, there was stuff that could have been expanded on a bit more in that beginning segment. And someone give Holden a shoulder to cry on or a hug or SOMETHING.
# 7
Posted:
Feb 5 2018, 03:28 PM
OUCH poor kid, she's super cute. Please don't make the baby cry!
Also somebody give Holden a gosh darn hug, he more than deserves one at this point.
Visually this is a cool comic. I'll just say that I basically agree with everything that Sean has said so I don't repeat too much ha ha.
Great work!
Also somebody give Holden a gosh darn hug, he more than deserves one at this point.
Visually this is a cool comic. I'll just say that I basically agree with everything that Sean has said so I don't repeat too much ha ha.
Great work!
# 6
Posted:
Jan 31 2018, 06:34 PM
This is RAD, Radji did pretty much all of this and I love it <33
# 5
Posted:
Jan 31 2018, 09:40 AM
; - ; that boy need a friend... poor guy.
# 4
Posted:
Jan 31 2018, 08:35 AM
I really like the way the setting is built here. Radji, you always expand more and more on how you picture a city block in Void and I love it. The color pallet was a great choice because it definitely compliments the gore in the comic. The story was solid and a bit heartbreaking from the POV of the child. I had to reread the part where the child is being chased into the alley, because at first I didn't noticed she was being pursued by two goons. I think if you had a few more panels showing that chase it would come together a bit more! Good shit, you crazy kids!
# 3
Posted:
Jan 31 2018, 08:12 AM
The palette you went with was really nice. It gave it a really cool Sin City vibe.
# 2
Posted:
Jan 2 2018, 03:42 PM
STOP HURTING HOLDEN
# 1
Posted:
Jan 2 2018, 01:34 PM
HONHONHONHON
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Feb 6th, 2018
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