Aha! I loved it! Great manga-esque style! Your story had a great flow and all the characters' personalities are very distinct!

well you certainly succeeded in your goal of making this the most "anime" comic I've seen on this site!all the tropes you touch on crack me up! This is a cute, silly little comic, not a lotta substance but it works for your experiment. I feel like there are depths to Florence you aren't quite touching on yet, like you keep hinting at them but haven't explored much yet. I hope we can understand more about him soon! Great comic!

In manga, a twenty one year old can look like a fifteen year old.
Actually, you're right, he's almost 15. It's just for the sake of this comic's humor I made it look like that. Don't think too hard on it

For some reason I always thought Florence was in the 12 - 14 age range (which obviously made this story really weird for me at first), but after re-reading his bio I guess there's nothing to suggest he's that young really. Just a childish adult, like Will Ferrell. Now that I've realized that I'm going to read this comic from a different perspective before locking in a vote.

I really enjoyed it! Silly story and it was very manga.

I am totally loving the dress up thing and I think it should be made into a jam. :O

The printable version of page 2: http://www.mediafire.com/view/6ai70y5dduqd2ds/clothes1.jpg
And if you want to be creative, a printable black and white version you can color on your own: http://www.mediafire.com/view/p0i3isb4g882p7p/clothes2.jpg

This comic was a discussion about how someone should make a void comic to look and feel like a japanese comic, and I thought it would be a good change from what I did in the past few comics. Unfortunately I forgot to draw the thing from right to left until it was too late so that part was a fail and I don't want to change it now either. I tried a very typical ecchi story and stuck Mize and Florence in it If anyone is wondering about the backgrounds, those are scanned images of screen tones from my collection.
To Nishi, I have established the fact that 1) mize knows Florence's secret identity, 2) Mize needs a new jacket, preferable one that is not only dry clean
I hope that will help you in the future.