Ziggy and Doodle Dan vs. Penelope and Pillbug
Critiques & Comments
# 4
Posted:
Oct 30 2010, 01:42 PM
Sorry ziggy didn't get to make an appearance in this comic.. He was the one I was most excited about drawing.
# 3
Posted:
Oct 30 2010, 11:09 AM
Sean, most of the color are too messy to really make things better, pages 5-6 look clearer and better than most that preceed them. Except page 1, that one looked pretty nice.
Amaloo, you go off against two super-vilains, and yet you turn out to be the most evil, ending the comic just as pillbug comes in! that's just inhumane. D:
Amaloo, you go off against two super-vilains, and yet you turn out to be the most evil, ending the comic just as pillbug comes in! that's just inhumane. D:
# 2
Posted:
Oct 29 2010, 11:18 PM
well, i'm good to go, but I'll warn everyone now. It's shlock as usual. To Amaloo, it's awesome to have matched up with you, but I apologize for what i ended up making. I know your gonna win, no doubt, but i had fun drawing your characters and I hope you had fun drawing mine.
# 1
Posted:
Oct 14 2010, 09:44 PM
PsychoSean, you better bring the heat!
I'm super excited to see new Pillbug adventures again!
I'm super excited to see new Pillbug adventures again!
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Artist
If you're going to write by hand, you definitely need to start practicing writing your handwriting more. It's just as important as anatomy practice if you plan on utilizing it. Speaking of anatomy, nice job on giving generous proportions to the hands and feet. Your facial anatomy also feels improved, but your torsos, arms, and legs could use it a bit more.
This honestly is your best battle yet, and I'm glad you had fun with it. I hope you battle again soon and even if you lose, maybe use Ziggy as a secondary character to pal around Doodle Dan with, since it's obvious you like drawing him.
Amaloo: Pretty work as usual. I really liked your mild use of purple/red for Penelope and Duane's hair in the first page. I think it'd be good practice to try and do other colors in a blue hue as well. You have good color usage in this comic otherwise, as usual. Your anatomy and skills have improved, too. Always room to improve, even in rubber hose style, but this was pretty good.
It's a bummer you didn't get as far as you wanted in this comic. It is also a shame we didn't get to see Pillbug or Ziggy, but your story is starting off strong for what could be a really good tournament and be real interesting. If you move on, hopefully you can do all you want to do. This was a good comic though and I can't wait to see what you do next!