MrPr: Pretty simple comic, for a brief encounter it works well enough and your lines and fills are clean enough. Now that you've reached this level it's a good time to start working on some new goals to improve on: You already know you've got aways to go with backgrounds, I'm gonna assume that the sheer lack of them in this comic was due to time constraints more than anything else so I won't harp on it much here. This is also a good time to re-evaluate how you make your word balloons, as the borders between the balloon line and the letters are often too close for comfort, making for a claustrophobic read; try to work on giving your words a bit a more room to breath in their word balloons, and conforming both as necessary to make a more pleasant reading experience
Marymuscle: hope everything is okay and that we see stuff from you in the future
Virtua vs. Mary
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# 3
Posted:
Jul 13 2019, 03:06 PM
# 2
Posted:
Jun 27 2019, 04:28 PM
this two girls are going to have fun wrestling i bet >:3
# 1
Posted:
Jun 18 2019, 10:29 AM
Big blue girl VS Stretchy red girl~
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
3 weeks
Ended:
Jul 16th, 2019
Votes Cast:
13
Page Views:
1311
Winner:
MrPr1993
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Marymuscle: good luck with stuff and look forward to seeing whatever comics you are able to do in the future.