thanksso much for the crits, guys! I def agree which is why i was so anxious about my submission. I will definitely focus on better definition next match. Orion, it was great battling you, and sorry you had so much interference in your scheduling
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Bootcamp Round Robin: Set 1 / David Birch vs. Croco
Critiques & Comments
# 7
Posted:
May 9 2019, 08:33 PM
# 6
Posted:
May 9 2019, 12:55 PM
Stylo: i knew from the days you were only in incubator that you had a very paint-like style, it's very true here. Problem is, it can look very unfinished when done on a short notice, and it's the case here, David Birch's comic is only some flat inks, but it look more finished, without taking the drawing skills into account. you have an interesteing budding style, but you need to polish it, in my opinion. i think you should train to do some regular digital painting by taking screenshot of disneys and redoing those screenshots in digital paint, it's an exercise I did a lot at art school.
Orion. It's just flat inks with a lot a white, maybe too much of white, and the panel making need some work so that it look more dynamic and less chaotic
Orion. It's just flat inks with a lot a white, maybe too much of white, and the panel making need some work so that it look more dynamic and less chaotic
# 5
Posted:
May 9 2019, 03:58 AM
Orion: I really like the variety of angles and poses you use! They feel very natural and lead on to each other well. I think you should dial it back on the “overlapping” panels though (such as on pages 3,5 and 6) as it makes the pages feel cluttered and confusing, at least at this level of rendering.
Crocostyle: I like your style, it really lends itself to action and movement, but I agree with Elyan in that it was a little too sketchy and hard to follow. And I absolutely love the panel where Croco bites David’s arm but overall I feel like the fight could have been a bit more creative.
Crocostyle: I like your style, it really lends itself to action and movement, but I agree with Elyan in that it was a little too sketchy and hard to follow. And I absolutely love the panel where Croco bites David’s arm but overall I feel like the fight could have been a bit more creative.
# 4
Posted:
May 8 2019, 05:59 PM
Ooooh this was a neat matchup!
I absolutely love the humor in your writing, orion.
And stylo: ouch that kinda got croco in a sensitive spot, didnt it?
These stories are really neat and I like them a lot! IM LOOKING FORWARD TO FIGHTING BOTH OF YOU
I absolutely love the humor in your writing, orion.
And stylo: ouch that kinda got croco in a sensitive spot, didnt it?
These stories are really neat and I like them a lot! IM LOOKING FORWARD TO FIGHTING BOTH OF YOU
# 3
Posted:
May 8 2019, 12:36 PM
orion: i like your storytelling and the little things like david in the last page giving this a little kick. great job on finishing the entry up to this level. some more lineweight or some bolder black fill ins would have helped the overall look i think. the sudden black blocks in pg 6 were a little sudden and felt rather lonely/out of nowhere. its a nice visual contrast effect but in the minimalistic render here its a bit much exclusive for that page.
crocostyle: i must admit i would have liked it if there were some clearer overlying sketches there that would have made reading this a little clearer. with time so short you did a great job finishing up what you did but it was hard to follow on that level of sketchyness. other than that the plot wasn´t really enough to judge on. poor david btw a comic like this with finished quality would be crazy cool.
crocostyle: i must admit i would have liked it if there were some clearer overlying sketches there that would have made reading this a little clearer. with time so short you did a great job finishing up what you did but it was hard to follow on that level of sketchyness. other than that the plot wasn´t really enough to judge on. poor david btw a comic like this with finished quality would be crazy cool.
# 2
Posted:
May 8 2019, 09:31 AM
VERY NICE COMICS YOU GUYS
# 1
Posted:
Apr 23 2019, 09:52 PM
MY BOY STYLO IS GONNA MESS YOU UP, SON!
Sparring Match
Drawing Time:
2 weeks
Ended:
May 14th, 2019
Votes Cast:
12
Page Views:
1801
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Thank you for all the feedback on the comic. This round felt like a kick in the pants on what to expect and I am gonna bring that back around to make my next one even better!