@Tenbu;You can defiantly see an improvement from your first entry to this one and your opening shot of the cemetery looks amazing I wish I could see more of that from you! I'm so sorry you had two defaults in a row, I can't wait to see another artists interpretation of Tsung.

It happened to you again, Tenbu! It's such a shame because you're bringing good work to the table. It's clear and solidly put together. Also, I'm eager to see other artists interpret Tsung. here's to next round.

Awe, I am sorry that your opponent defaulted, Tenbu. I absolutely adore these panels. The first page had me going 'woooahh!'. That said, there was a(n understandable) drop in how finished the other pages were compared to the first page. I can't wait to see more from you, this character is very nice and the choreography between fights are sooooo smooth. The first panel of the last page is probably my second favorite, it has such nice fluidity to it.

You gotta do what you gotta do sometimes. Sorry you didn't get to crank out your comic. I would've loved to see what you had to offer! I don't think I'll get another default next round (knock on wood). I look forward to seeing more from you!

Yep, yeah, looks like I defaulted. Kind of a bummer cause I had a whole cool story planned out, but things aligned strangely and I didn't get to make anything of it. So it goes I guess. Sorry I didn't get to give you a challenge Tenbu, but you deserve the win, your comic was rad! Also sorry to everyone else who wanted a proper battle, I know these defaults are a little lame. But I like this whole void system a lot and soon I'll be in a better position for making things like this, so I'm looking forward to being able to really give it my all! See y'all when that happens

Yeah I know... I'm kinda bummed about it. The character in the beginning is Abigail by the way. Wanted to continue the story from where it left off last round. I guess I drew them pretty similar. It's going to be tough for me this next round now that classes have started back up for me, but I will do what I can. Thank you for your critiques!

Another default against you Tenbu, that sucks! You draw really nice figures, I agree with Pyras that I'd love to see you relaly bust out a super neat background. I'm not entirely sure what Mako was doing in the beginning of the comic, though the end was much clearer. I am interested to see what you'll put out next round!

An improvement from last round, and a more complete story! Again your character design is tight as hell, and what you need more work on is your backgrounds. Page 4 shows promise so with better time management you can deliver a stronger comic next round.