Intro Story / Rascal and Rina
Critiques & Comments
# 14
Posted:
Jan 17 2022, 04:25 PM
MG
# 13
Posted:
Jan 17 2022, 02:59 PM
this is next level, god damn. MG work right here for sure
# 12
Posted:
Dec 22 2021, 01:59 PM
this is fucking stellar man, I've never seen something like this, it immediately reminded me old video game intros it would have been cool with jest the 2 pages, but the last 2 are some of the best stuff I've seen like ever
# 11
Posted:
Dec 22 2021, 02:43 AM
This is possibly the best intro I ever seen on the site. I got completely bamboozled by the turn.
# 10
Posted:
Dec 21 2021, 09:07 AM
Extremely impressive visuals ...page 2 in particular is staggeringly good, I would totally buy that being a clip from the next popular indie game. It's so convincing!
Even when the more unique game setting is dropped for something more conventional, you keep the quality so high it wasn't disappointing at all The word cinematic comes to mind for some of those location shots. I can't fault your creativity and quality, 10/10. I'm blown away.
Visuals aside, Rascel and Rina are cute & I think they fit the standard retro-game protag mould very well (I'm guessing this was the goal)
(cheeky ramble)
This was fantastic! Congrats Jackster
Even when the more unique game setting is dropped for something more conventional, you keep the quality so high it wasn't disappointing at all The word cinematic comes to mind for some of those location shots. I can't fault your creativity and quality, 10/10. I'm blown away.
Visuals aside, Rascel and Rina are cute & I think they fit the standard retro-game protag mould very well (I'm guessing this was the goal)
(cheeky ramble)
This was fantastic! Congrats Jackster
# 9
Posted:
Dec 20 2021, 08:58 PM
Wtfff!? This is amazing on so many levels. So much talent!!!!!! I was already blown away by the pixel stuff, but my jaw dropped with those last two pages. Seriously, stellar work.
# 8
Posted:
Dec 18 2021, 11:09 AM
This was so good. The beginning had me wanting to reach for a snes controller. Chefs kiss on that transition from 16 bit to void city. The nice reveal. I'm craving more
# 7
Posted:
Dec 17 2021, 07:07 PM
Dang man, I think you just won Void in the month of December and a few end of the year awards with this XD.
But in all seriousness, this one was really well crafted and the cuties of these characters are just off the charts. Now I wonder who will be the first to fight this pair and how will they fair in their time in Void City.
You did amazing and you should really be proud of yourself.
But in all seriousness, this one was really well crafted and the cuties of these characters are just off the charts. Now I wonder who will be the first to fight this pair and how will they fair in their time in Void City.
You did amazing and you should really be proud of yourself.
# 6
Posted:
Dec 17 2021, 11:37 AM
very cool, man. The first page /chapter was full of so many neat character designs. The dragons the protags defeat were so cute. I of course like dragons MORE than lions, though. so you can imagine my delight when you turned the story on its head in the next chapter. would really like to know what happened to everyone, now!
then, the art style change to show Rascal is not in his home dimension any more : wow! very polished looking.
it's not often a character's backstory includes a dimensional riff into the enter void. I can't wait to see who they battle, first! there are other vidya characters and other cartoony animals: so many options!
then, the art style change to show Rascal is not in his home dimension any more : wow! very polished looking.
it's not often a character's backstory includes a dimensional riff into the enter void. I can't wait to see who they battle, first! there are other vidya characters and other cartoony animals: so many options!
# 5
Posted:
Dec 17 2021, 03:59 AM
Killed it man.
# 4
Posted:
Dec 16 2021, 11:07 AM
Jackster this is absolutely INCREDIBLE!! I was entirely hooked, the level of animation and love put into the first two sequences is something that blasted me back years- im in awe!! And when it came down to getting thrown into Void City, the amount of detail put into the comic style and differentiating the two art forms of pixel and traditional digital art came out beautiful on both ends, this was sucha treat!!
( also that Pyras cameo is fucking killing me omgg )
( also that Pyras cameo is fucking killing me omgg )
# 3
Posted:
Dec 16 2021, 10:14 AM
This might be the best comic i've read (and watched) the entire year!
I even forgot it was a void comic and not a game while reading the first page.
You really outdid yourself with this intro Jackster! Now i can't wait to see more of these two.
I even forgot it was a void comic and not a game while reading the first page.
You really outdid yourself with this intro Jackster! Now i can't wait to see more of these two.
# 2
Posted:
Dec 16 2021, 10:07 AM
...O......M......G....
W H A T
W H A T
# 1
Posted:
Dec 16 2021, 10:03 AM
Jackster wHAT IN THE WOOOORLD?! This is phenomenal! I love you you captured— the exact feel of looking at an old school game intro , I was hooked at every turn!
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