I gotta jet so I'll make this quick, Baists nice comic but it didn't hold up well compared to your last few art wise and story wise, it looks like you did run out of time Still nice though.

Niles, it was alright, I kinda got lost and you rely on those tones in place of backgrounds too much and sometimes it even dominates your art and it gets hard to see. Still cool to see you pumping out some comics out though.

Overall Baists has my vote. Now I got a plane to catch!

hey guys! thanks for the comments! Im sorry this one didnt meet the demands of my first two comics. I've been gearing up for going back to school in january and recently have been working on developing my own major. this takes alot of thought and takes precedent over these 2 page comic (im sorry to admit). anyway this will be my last comic until the summer. I am sorry to all those who were expecting anything more...

thank you guys so much for having awesome ideas!

Sofa King: I'm glad you're taking time to study the elements of comics. You seem to have gotten better, but I would still say your use of typography and word choice need work (make the text smaller and try to fit it evenly in the word balloons). Take a look at some well established titles out there, or even bigger published works (Watchmen by Alan Moore is always a great teacher). you can learn a lot from the professional writers.
I really enjoyed your depiction of Maansik, as well as the fact that Bhaav stole NILES's jacket.

BrainBaists: I felt like this comic lacked some of the spark your previous ones had. The story seemed a little flat, mainly in they way that Maansik kind of casually spoke to NILES and Niles didn't even seem to notice. also, is that mark on Bhaav a new permenant design? you might want to add that to your design sheet asap.

Sofa King, this one was a lot more readable then the last piece I read but there were still some grammatical errors and some words missing. I can say that the fixes you did make it a lot more readable and enjoyable. I really like your art style as well, i feel like where you made improvements in linguistics you somewhat moved backwards in quality in comparison to the jane blonde battle. I would love to see the clean consistent art of (most) of that battle along with a better understanding for the dialogue and writing of sequentials. keep working at in and ill be watching you for sure cause I'm really interested in where you can take things.

just finshed uploading as well. i enjoyed making this comic very much.

HA!!!
MADE IT BACK!!! just in time
i read up on comic book typography so  this one should be readable maybe even enjoyable cant wait to read yours BRAIN-BAIST

looking forward to this!

Glad you're doing all these battle Sofa King and BrainBaists, this is going to be great!