[The Pacifier]

a big self portrait that i did of myself
it took about 2 weeks id say
(trying to get into painting more medias)

[The Pacifier]

well I'm kinda working on proportions and anatomy
and what better way to start than with marvel characters

(On Topic)As you can see Ive pretty much noticed the mistakes i made but if anyone has any input please feel free to comment and help me out

I'm also working on penciling more, so if anyone has any advice there too it would help

[CrimsonKnight]

Hot damn, I love Iron Man!  That's awesome!  Hm the only thing that I can think of that kinda sticks out is that in the view from the back, while I like the design that you made, it doesn't seem to fit with the intricacies of the front views that you have. 

Ah, also from the bust shot in the upper left, compared to the full body shot below it, the shoulder pads seem to join into the body the upper left one whereas in the one below it they are more of a separate piece. Really like that font you have...I love Tony Stark lol 

[The Pacifier]

This is a guy that i drew when i figured that i was on a roll
so i was playin around with character design and this is what i came up with
to bad he doesnt have a nameXD
all i know is that i wanna call that weapon a bannana dagger~lol

this is another one of my no named characters, ive been studying alot of different styles and stuff
trying to get my faces right>also been workin on pencil work STILL.
i also made em a story which im savin for a comic or void

[CrimsonKnight]

Nice linework, looks like concept art from a JRPG.  Reminds me of the kid from Suikoden 3 & ICO. Horns look sweet, and so does his banana dagger  Rather curious about the backstory behind this char, you wouldn't happen to have any preview pages for'em would ya?

[Enef]

These look REALLY good. I would love to see you ink these, if you are worried about using the originals, now they are scanned you can always print them out and ink on the printouts? Thats probably a good way to practice inking!

It looks like you've really moved up a level on anatomy but it's always "good looking" people, try some fat, ugly old people now and keep pushing yourself!

[The Pacifier]

Nice linework, looks like concept art from a JRPG.  Reminds me of the kid from Suikoden 3 & ICO. Horns look sweet, and so does his banana dagger  Rather curious about the backstory behind this char, you wouldn't happen to have any preview pages for'em would ya?

actually no> not yet, but i actually plan too once i work on my paneling> which i actually plan on practicing today

[The Pacifier]

These look REALLY good. I would love to see you ink these, if you are worried about using the originals, now they are scanned you can always print them out and ink on the printouts? Thats probably a good way to practice inking!

It looks like you've really moved up a level on anatomy but it's always "good looking" people, try some fat, ugly old people now and keep pushing yourself!

actually im at a fault because im out of microns
but i plan to get some ASAP and when i do ill post it back>and ill also work on ugly and fat people
(will post soon)

[The Pacifier]

The Old The Bad and the Ugly=]

[Enef]

Yes! See, that's good!

Try pushing it further, doing full body poses, a fat person sitting around eating chips and watching TV! An old person on a park bench feeding the pigeons etc.

You do have a lot of skill, just keep pushing yourself!

[The Pacifier]

well im tryin to get as much practice as i can in over the summer
so i can gear up for void during the school year
and if that means i gotta draw fat old ugly people than so be it
lol

[The Pacifier]

i really dont have a name for this guy either
i did this last night when i got bored of looking at buildings and backgrounds
i made a story for em,but i dont wanna bother u guys with that

[Caravaggio]

I really can't add much, except maybe that the lines are still rather thin.  Maybe if the images were bigger, as in an actual fight, they'd work.  I had to double the layers on a submission once to make them dark enough.  It's the kind of thing I guess you have to be aware of ahead of time.

[The Pacifier]

never knew that
thatd be somethin i have to
keep in mind
thanks

[The Pacifier]

umm..
i had some down time today so i decided that id follow one of angies tutorials
im not really sure if its ok to use this pick so ill take it down if its a problem
but ANY kind of advice would help because i am completely new to this
thanksz=]

linework by~http://entervoid.com/member/3814

[Angie]

Dee said the pic could be used so it's no problem. My only suggestion would be to tone down the saturation of those colors, the red and green are a bit too intense. It's looking good otherwise!

[The Pacifier]

i really want to work on my story writing and stuff like that and what better way to do it than start with a story so i came up with this story called
I Hate Paper
this is the main character Brandon
ill post the story after i get everthing worked out

another character>chosing between twin sister or kid sister
[and yea i know her hip is off a little]

[The Pacifier]

another main character

my mega chill>xD

[Snakemeat]

 You realy don't need anything from me...

Go Seek-Qu-Wench-ial my thirst.

[The Pacifier]

been a while since i posted here
been practicin styles and stuff
this is all i have for now
ill post characters and comics very soon

straight from a 5 minute thinking session with myself

a penciling of cloud from final fantasy
couldve been smoother but i think its ok

[Phill]

Why isn't anybody commenting on this stuff? So far this is looking great, but one thing I'd like to see more of: Backgrounds! Your figures and facial expressions are great so far, but personally I think you can benefit from doing more backgrounds honestly. Keep it up.

[squid]

The Cloud picture could use more darks. You've got some nice darks in his face, such as pupils, eyebrows, forehead--that isn't repeated in too many other places. I think you could especially use some darks in his hair and turtleneck.. and probably other places too. you want a balance where tonal range is consisent all over. That lack of consistency is what's making it look unfinished, I think.

[fishbot]

nice improvement but i notice you kinda over use the peace sign in your poses nearly everyone is giving the double finger.
cant wait to see what the story for i hate paper is

[The Pacifier]

next void character after im through with media
ive got full story and all that jazz
and dont worry hes not a pyro
thats just for effect

and unfinished park scene u can kinda see where i was going with that
plan to finish it sometime in the near future

[The Pacifier]

been busy with school and stuff but this is what i got so far

this is something i did for a friend for christmas

i had time to kill after my math final so i slapped this down
besides it being a little off i think its ok