I think I've mentioned this to you more than once before, but you gotta vary up your linewidths! With everything the same linewidth, everything looks flat and 2D like they're all on the same plane, and thereby making figures hard to differentiate (it's very true in the pic with SG and the ogre-thing). All the detailwork is neat, but if you don't keep them separate they'll just get lost within themselves!
I also gotta agree with Lune about those faces; they've always got that blank/dead expression on them. Push it a little more!
Also, I don't know what the comic page is about, but that sudden NIPPON SUNBURST panel seems to just suddenly break the mood. That's just me, though.
Ohmageddon: Path of Conquest
Ohm the Conqueror vs. Saal, "Eva", Francis Herrman, Theakon, and Brett Black
@ 4:40 AM May 17th