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Great work on the board!
Love the site Looking forwarded to getting some crits and tighten up my work.
Great artist here. I'll be passing on my Crits others as well.

I don't have very many Sequentials...  YET but there coming.
Building up for battles.

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2 nearly finished pages.
I'm going back in and separating the panels as well as inking.


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here are a couple of other pieces to give an idea of where I am so far.

[E.W. Schneider]

Wow, there are all very cool! You've got a lot terrific anatomy, ink-work, and action flow. This is all really fantastic looking. I absolutely adore your action text. The squish slipp slipp slipp text looks phenomenal and so does the ping, zing, klang made by the bullets.

The only things I don't care for in this whole lot are the looking-up view produced by The Spirit (?). He kind of looks like Garrison Keillor because of it! Also, the blocky coloring on black-sumo-man seems off, too.

If those comics are you actual submissions for the site, you can just submit now. Because seriously, those look fantastic. I love the art and your selective colors.

[Angie]

Looks great! I really like the movement and expressiveness in your work. The one thing I was going to comment on as the gutters on the sequentials but from your comment I'm assuming you're fixing that. Your color choice for the mostpart is pretty solid but on the walking on water image what is what gets lost because almost everything is the same color. Like I know he's surrounded by water but since there's lightning coming from the sky you could have brought more attention to the sky to better differentiate it from the water.

[(Pi)]

really fantastic work! can't wait to see more from you, got a character idea?

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Thanks folks I appreciate the welcome

Wow, there are all very cool! You've got a lot terrific anatomy, ink-work, and action flow. This is all really fantastic looking. I absolutely adore your action text. The squish slipp slipp slipp text looks phenomenal and so does the ping, zing, klang made by the bullets.

The only things I don't care for in this whole lot are the looking-up view produced by The Spirit (?). He kind of looks like Garrison Keillor because of it! Also, the blocky coloring on black-sumo-man seems off, too.

If those comics are you actual submissions for the site, you can just submit now. Because seriously, those look fantastic. I love the art and your selective colors.

Thanks! I'm still working kinks out of my anatomy though, but I'm glad it reads well so far, the Up look on the Spirit was a rouge area for me. still not sure how to fix it.  the area around the shadows hat and eyes' needs work too IMO. The text is Fun to Do! I always like making it expressive it one of those items that uniquely to the medium I lugs it. The Coloring "style" on the the Black Sumo was suppose to carry over to all of the piece but I got unlazy  with the rest but didn't go back and fix  him.

Submission? OK, I need to go back and reread the rules for details. But no that's not my character or Submission.

Looks great! I really like the movement and expressiveness in your work. The one thing I was going to comment on as the gutters on the sequentials but from your comment I'm assuming you're fixing that. Your color choice for the mostpart is pretty solid but on the walking on water image what is what gets lost because almost everything is the same color. Like I know he's surrounded by water but since there's lightning coming from the sky you could have brought more attention to the sky to better differentiate it from the water.

Thanks! I get your point with the water sky thing. I kind of wanted it all to run together really but I guess it's not working quite as planned. Hmm thanks for the feed back there.

really fantastic work! can't wait to see more from you, got a character idea?

Thanxs!
I've got a couple of Ideas, but I need to lurk around a bit more to see which one my best fit or maybe Not fit.

[HAVEN!]

the layout bothers me on page 1. corner to corner panels are always confusing for me, and its hard for me to tell which one goes next.

other than that, art looks okay.

[Kuro]

Stylewise, it's a lot looser than the stuff I usually go for but it's still pretty sweet.

Your sequentials are killing me though. That's a lot of action & it's generally looking ok aside from the fact that it's given no space to breathe. You're too busy cramming panels in to page to really give us room to see anything the way we ought to be seeing it. And the sound effects are pretty trite too. Not saying scrap them, but put more thought in than things like "Pow!" I will say though that the shaping with the ricocheting bit's pretty nice

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the layout bothers me on page 1. corner to corner panels are always confusing for me, and its hard for me to tell which one goes next.

other than that, art looks okay.

preciate the comment on the layout, i hear ya,
looking for any advise on getting me past "okay" to awesome too. peace

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Stylewise, it's a lot looser than the stuff I usually go for but it's still pretty sweet.

Your sequentials are killing me though. That's a lot of action & it's generally looking ok aside from the fact that it's given no space to breathe. You're too busy cramming panels in to page to really give us room to see anything the way we ought to be seeing it. And the sound effects are pretty trite too. Not saying scrap them, but put more thought in than things like "Pow!" I will say though that the shaping with the ricocheting bit's pretty nice

Cool,
thanks for the feed back I'm in the process of breaking the panels us for  a bit more clarity . as well as using a couple other devices to make it more readable.
The soud effect thing comment is interesting  , Gets the wheels turning in a way they hadn't thanks, that's good.

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my entry From A Comic Jam I almost forgot I signed up for.
everybody contributes 1 page each.


fast for me but still fairly slow. 5 days too many hours.


 though her position isn't bad, the proportions are off on the female "Rage" in the final panel.
cheated on her foot for time as well.

I copped bits from the others pages for the BG at the bottom of the 1st section.
I wish i had cleared up the octo parasite in her mouth and the chrysalis bit at both ends above the monologue.

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Some original cats of mine.
from this skecthy sketch which ones are the most interesting?

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testing
 I'm thinking  maybe i'm back

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My Full Comic with the OP Characters from the previous
Kollossus & L'Epex



https://globalcomix.com/c/overwelming-tales-of-the-over-powers/chapters/en/1/1