I'm with Pi in saying that those paintings are damned awesome. But that comic of yours so far isn't doing you any justice, and looks very awkward. The first thing that looks strange to me is well... oddly enough, the earth, it looks nice, but compared to the bottom panel it just seems way out of place. If you're going for a change of scene type of deal (like the black and white represents something in the past), you have to make sure the reader knows that they're looking at something in the past (Like for example in Naruto, the white boarders around the panels often turn black to show a flashback and change back when returning to the present).
Second thing is even though your character looks very nice, his anatomy looks surprisingly stiff, I'm not sure how to explain why it is, but it's mainly his spine and shoulders that are throwing me off and making me think something is wrong. Last thing that's confusing me greatly is the perspective of the street on the outside in the last panel, from the viewers point of view, that street isn't level, or that's one crooked house and it's in the middle of the street. Your shading and showing of form is great, but I think you're lacking in other parts of the basics, you need to get some life studies under your belt, and a bit more practice with the point perspectives can also help you out greatly. Other than that though, this is promising.
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Dairyu
@ 11:57 PM May 13th