Hellis Incubator

Hellis Incubator

Hellis Incubator
« on: Jun 05, 2017, 01:57 PM »
Right. So I have lurked this site for long enough without contributing I think! (10 years, whew.)

Without more preamble; Here is Matilda White.

Reference/Design Sheet:

Intro Comic:

Matilda White is a medic in the 109'th Thumaturgic Corps, A military unit that uses magic. She comes from a reality where humanity discovered and utilized magic on a industrial scale, creating a sort of Utopia while always on the hunt for more magic. However, they also found god, literally. While fighting GOD, her magic engine accidentally sent her hurtling across realities to Void City.

How she works, kinda.
Matildas Miracle Engine does not shield  her from others magic or absorb it. It merely passively charges itself with the latent energy of the world around her. In a place like Void, it is basically working overtime. As she is a medic, her specialty lies in healing miracles, such as mending flesh and bone without pain, turning sick flesh healthy. She knows how to do the basic offensive spells, like lightning from her finger or a stream of fire.

Theoretically, the Engine could grant her any wish, if she can properly charge it and envision what she wants. But to do anything beyond her training demands massive resources and a very sharp and focused mind. Neither which she posses.
« Last Edit: Jun 12, 2017, 12:44 PM by Hellis »

Re: Hellis Incubator
« Reply #1 on: Jun 05, 2017, 04:40 PM »
Sweet Lord. You registered in 2005. I guess that makes it 10+ years being around the place. Glad you decided to finally post something, and starting your character intro and the like.

One thing. I couldn't get past the first paragraph of your character's background story. Mostly because it didn't speak about them, but the world they come from.
I would like to discover that, by reading their comics.
Same for your character, it is great to have a base to work with, in case you decide to go battling right away once they get approved, but everyone will prefer to "hear" stories through illustrations you'll make in the future.

I really like your style, and the 1st intro page looks promising. Hope to see more of you soon.

Welcome to VOID!

Re: Hellis Incubator
« Reply #2 on: Jun 05, 2017, 08:20 PM »
Ahah. Fair enough. I write a whole lot outside of comics. So i guess it is a habit of being overly descriptive in posts.

Re: Hellis Incubator
« Reply #3 on: Jun 07, 2017, 02:28 AM »
Kept thinking about the comment I posted here the other day.

And I feel I must apologize for perhaps coming towards as rude, or uncaring.
My intention was definitely not to discourage you or anything similar.

If anything, I'd love to see you improve as thing move forward. I really like the concept of your character, because I have a thing for healers/medics. So, seeing her in comics here at VOID, would be beyond awesome to me.

Re: Hellis Incubator
« Reply #4 on: Jun 07, 2017, 05:33 AM »
Kept thinking about the comment I posted here the other day.

And I feel I must apologize for perhaps coming towards as rude, or uncaring.
My intention was definitely not to discourage you or anything similar.

If anything, I'd love to see you improve as thing move forward. I really like the concept of your character, because I have a thing for healers/medics. So, seeing her in comics here at VOID, would be beyond awesome to me.

The criticism didn't feel very harsh to me. Do not worry about it. If anything, you made me think of how I am going to present in it comic form in the future :D

Re: Hellis Incubator
« Reply #5 on: Jan 24, 2018, 03:23 PM »
Retribution brings new blood into the VCPD


Trained by formerly retired Special Task Force officer Bethony Baskins, the squad consists of 4 relatively young members of the VCPD, handpicked by Baskins and Arena.

Armand Moretti; The squads strong man, Armand may look like a minotaur, but he is in fact a werebull. He is able to take the shape of a massive bull many times the size of a normal one. Although he prefers to take a shape between human bull to utilize the strength of both shapes. Prone to rage when in Bull forms. The only one able to get through to him is his wife, Jamie.

Jamie Yamashiro-Moretti: Animal empath and wife of Armand. The groups emotional anchor and hen mother.

Captain Lee Hyuang: The group leader is the only one without any meta-abilities. Instead, Lee is just highly trained in most manners of firearms and posses a very indepth knowledge in how the citys many criminals operate and how his team can best utilize this information.

Tabitha Tollman: Team Psychic and Telekinetic. Her Telepathic abilities are very limited, but her Telekinetic powers are formidable. She is the youngest member, having been lifted directly from her graduating class at the VCPD Police Academy.  She is also Baskings grand daughter.

Lady Baskings:

Intro Roughs:

Re: Hellis Incubator
« Reply #6 on: Jan 24, 2018, 04:05 PM »
So HYPED for the Squad in action! I want them to meet up with the Danger Rangers someday! Maybe Riot Squad + Danger Rangers + captured villains = VCPD's Suicide Squad

Re: Hellis Incubator
« Reply #7 on: Apr 05, 2018, 12:43 AM »
Squads been pushed back, due to their creator (me) having cough Vampire madness.

Akira Matzuga
True Age: 30-something
Apperent Age: Eternally 22

Species: Vampire, Specifically the "Xāthity̒" bloodline.

A clubhost and crossdressing, in your face, smile like the sun socialite and Alt Fashion affecionado, Akira runs the Spiders Bite. A popular nightclub that caters to a lot of the alternative crowd but accepts all walks of life. More importantly however, is that its actually a Vampire hangout, with rooms accessed only by "Special VIP's" and their "Dates". Akira keeps things above board however, no killing, maiming or similair stuff on the club properties. He also keeps some of the "Good red" on tap for those that are less picky about getting it from the source.

Akira is a pretty different breed of Vampire. His Sire, a woman named Boonsri, is of the "Xāthity̒" bloodline. The Xāthity bloodline is a daywalking breed, but lack a lot of the strengths of most vampires. They heal slower then the average vampire, having to gorge themselves on blood quite extensively to even come close to some of the more physically powerfull clans and bloodlines. They lack the ability to transform and their strength is negligibly different then a humans.

They are however, Radiant. Their powers lie on the social and mental plane. Aside from being fully capable of functioning in the Sun, they passively draw everyone around them to like them and feel at ease around them. This effect is amplified the more attention they get. A Xathity Elder, can basicly turn a room a into willing servants with a smile. Another strength they have that is pretty unique to their particular bloodline is their ability to siphon information from the blood they drink. The more they drink of a persons blood, the more they learn about them. Drink enough of a persons blood and that persons most intimate feelings and memories will be known to the Xathity vampire.

Obviusly, Akira is super green, so his powers are much more limited.

« Last Edit: Apr 05, 2018, 12:49 AM by Hellis »

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« Reply #8 on: Dec 31, 2018, 06:09 PM »
Jules Abelard aka the Fox is a Void City Maffioso and Hitman.  A member of the same family that employs The Smile, his methodology runs counter to his compatriot, utilizing poisons, neurotoxins and chemicals to drive his victims to get them to do what he wants or believe what he wishes them to believe.

Jules is a Haitian born male who came to void city at an early age, where he aquired a bachelors and later a masters in Biochemistry and Psychology. Jules was in with the mob from early age, having made his first hit at the tender age of 16 as an initiation to a small trigger group. The kill was a messy affair, where he almost died from his target being more keen and aware of his surroundings then anticipated. The first bullet went wide as the target ran at the site of a nervous teenager reaching for something inside his jacket. Two others were killed in the ensuing chase. But he was in. 

Where his kill would leave a lasting impression on him, it was not going to dissuade him from getting his. He simply decided that the personal approach was not for him. Were others relished in the up close and personal, or the chase, Jules saw the life like dominos. YOu had to align numbers to give you the optimal trade off. Never keep to much on you so that they could lock you up, let others do the hard work. Jules used the money from the Mob work to go to collage and later university, where he excelled, being a exceptionally intelligent young man. He aquired a Masters in biochemistry, taking a special interest in mind altering medicine and chemical compounds. He tried out his new concoctions during parties, working out what made people docile and obedient nad what drove people to violence or out of character actions.

Soon enough, his work was performed trough varius chemicals and poisons, going so far as to drive a married couple to kill eachother, locked in a stage of drug induced psychosis. Having seen the potential in the man, the Head of the family approached and offered Jules a very peculiar mask.

And so The Fox was born.

« Last Edit: Dec 31, 2018, 06:11 PM by Hellis »

Re: Hellis Incubator
« Reply #9 on: Feb 20, 2019, 01:16 PM »
Name: Nomad.
Occupation: Big Woof
Species:Ascended Mongolian Wolf

Nomads a mongolian wolf, enlightened and ascended by a divine presence known as the Blue Wolf, the alleged canine ancestor of the Mongols and Djinghis can himself. Tasked with herding and testing the "half wolves" of the herds onto the right path, his purpose it to judge those more man than wolves. As mankind has become a plague, and werewolves only embodiment the worst of wolf-kind and humankind alike. In order to get his human shape, Nomad had to eat the very heart of a freshly killed human. The transformation is not total, his scars and his eyes remain.

He is currently drawn towards Void city, as there has been an increase in werewolf activity.

Nomads faster nad stronger then both the average wolf and human, and posses regenartive properties similair to the lowe end of an average werewolf. He is not weak to silver, nor any holy magic or similair, as he is not infact a werewolf.

Beastial Aura: Nomads not human. He is not even half human. Though he speaks like one, walks like one. He has an aura about him that intimidates and unsettles non predatory species on a basic, primal level. Withwerewolves and other primal predators, this comes of as big, walking "Fuck you".

Limited Telepathy; Nomad is able to speak directly into the mind of any creature bound to the moon, such as wolves and werewolves. With wolves, he can often draw upon their help and is always seen with at least 3-4 animals in his midst as a result. For Werewolves, they can simply hear and respond to his messages.


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