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News & Events / Rae and Blue vs. Dairyu now online!
« Last post by Staff Bot on Today at 01:15 AM »
Rae and Blue vs. Dairyu is now online for reading, voting, and critiquing.
News & Events / Elijah (Eli) Mikhailov vs. Talon now online!
« Last post by Staff Bot on Aug 18, 2019, 04:15 PM »
Elijah (Eli) Mikhailov vs. Talon is now online for reading, voting, and critiquing.
THE INCUBATOR / Re: Rivana's Outcasts
« Last post by Rivana on Aug 17, 2019, 08:35 AM »
Heathen, first of all, thanks for the feedback! I have  been reading your comics and I love the Smile so much and looking forward to seeing more of him in Void.

With that said, you're right about the panel spacing. 

And yep there is a portal behind her. I love the cat idea on the 3rd panel. The only thing is that I feel that the cat would get into a too close of a proximity to the portal (closer than it was initially) if I included it in the 3rd panel when its natural reaction is to move away from it? Here is the final-ish version of that first page. Let me know what you think :)

THE INCUBATOR / Re: Rivana's Outcasts
« Last post by Heathen on Aug 17, 2019, 12:51 AM »
I'll echo what Duel said,  it's refreshing to see an incubator start out with some pages!

Looking at your first page, I have notes. The full tier panel showing the portal appearing works, but the thickness of the gutter between it and the second panel tier really breaks up the sequence and implies a longer passage of time than you want. Then panels 2 and 3 lack any elements that inform their relationship to each other. Maybe you'll be showing the portal behind her in panel 3, which will help a lot. I would also use the cat. It's startled in panel 1, so maybe show it bounding away as she comes through the portal, either into the background or, better yet, right towards us.

Can't wait to see these pages come together!
News & Events / Jane Blonde vs. Drednaut now online!
« Last post by Staff Bot on Aug 16, 2019, 10:04 AM »
Jane Blonde vs. Drednaut is now online for reading, voting, and critiquing.
THE INCUBATOR / Re: Rivana's Outcasts
« Last post by Rivana on Aug 14, 2019, 07:27 AM »
I am pretty set on Mina's intro so I'll just continue on working on the comic. I'll probably tweak her  description more in the final version :)

I know I said I wasn't going  to introduce Ran nor Dani in Void anytime soon but a story idea for Ran came up so I typed up a rough draft for him to go back to later. Feel free to let me know what you think:

Ran Gavinmaur
Age: 29
Hair: Black
Eyes: Blue
Height: 6'2"

Ran was an elite sniper in the army until he got kicked out for insubordination. After his stint as a soldier, he decided to live a more easygoing life. Ran became a bodyguard for hire - his main client was one of  the Void's richest businessman - Robert Dancowen - who would hire Ran to guard his daughter, Dani, from time to time. 

However, most of Ran's income was from gambling and he was particularly good at it. He didn't drink so that was his vice - and the occasional sex with women to take some of the edge off.

A lot of people would find Ran abrasive because he was direct and to the point. He never minced his words. He also appeared stoic most of the time. Plus, his unusually high win rate at gambling would sure ruffle some feathers on more than one occasion.  Ran was no stranger to fights but he handled himself well and could take a fair amount of beating when it comes to it. Sometimes he'd just allow himself to get hit for fun. Being a trained sniper, he was incredibly patient and calm in most situations. His actions were almost always calculated. He rarely loses his temper. 

Life was getting too easy for Ran that everything felt very mundane and meaningless..until that one night when a strange shadowy creature appeared in his apartment....
News & Events / New Character: Nagy Tamasz
« Last post by Staff Bot on Aug 13, 2019, 06:20 PM »
JCee created a new character - Nagy Tamasz
Art Jams / Re: Cosplay Jam
« Last post by InkyBrain on Aug 12, 2019, 12:17 PM »
Hope you brought your shittin' pants.

THE INCUBATOR / Re: Judgement's incubation
« Last post by hypersomnia on Aug 11, 2019, 02:48 PM »
cleaned up lineart on Judgement.

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