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THE INCUBATOR / Rivana's Outcasts
« on: Aug 03, 2019, 08:43 PM »
Greetings everyone! Finally got around to creating my incubator thread.  My style of writing characters is fairly simple. I don't aim for originality really  but I like giving them interesting personalities and predicaments. I love seeing how they react and develop overtime why interacting with other people's characters. I developed them in role playing and I have fun continuing that format. I had too much fun that I actually taught myself to draw in 2010  and make a comic out of their canon stories in Eon.

The best part about them being in Void is that I can actually consider this canon if I wanted to. I still haven't decided but we'll see how it goes. :)

Here is my first  character that I plan to submit. Hope you like her.  She is one of my original OCs and she has a lot of history so I apologize if things sound so convoluted. Thanks in advance for checking my thread  out. <3

Design Sheet:

Full Name: Mina Kiefervon

Other Names: Raven (a nickname that stuck perhaps due to her raven-black hair. Also her being some sort of enigma. She can be both a blessing and a curse to the people she encounters)

Race: Vampire

Birthplace: Odilon in Eltheros (A world outside of Void)

Age:  Stopped aging at 23 but she is around 290 years old. However, she spent 250 years in a "deep sleep"  so her mind and maturity is still pretty close to her appearance.

Height: 5'6"

Hair: Black

Eyes: Pale green

Hobbies: Shopping for clothes, matchmaking, Improving her magical abilities


Illusion magic (She studied illusion/control magic  extensively ever since she was young - Way before she awakened  her abilities to cast portals)

Can cast portals to different dimensions - an ability she rarely uses.  She can also use these portals offensively to cut through anything in space and sometimes teleport. She is inherently connected to these portals and they are a constant drain to her. Therefore, she almost always need to feed on blood whenever she gets the chance.

Standard vampire-related abilities: Immortality. She heals quickly if she is well-fed. If she is hungry, she can barely stand sunlight but otherwise she doesn't disintegrate in the sun. Slightly stronger/faster and has keener senses than an average human.

If in the state of blood lust, she is unable to cast any magic as her mind is in complete chaos. She becomes completely feral.

Weaknesses: Has a horrible sense of direction , she also can't swim (has a phobia of deep waters). Impulsive and has a short-temper.  People she cares about as they can be easily used to get to her. As a result, she doesn't like to being in close relationships - romantic or otherwise. Her skills in hand-to-hand combat leave a lot to be desired.  A bit of a control freak.

Personality: Raven has a wicked sense of humor and a bit of a smart-ass. She is a mix of being approachable and at the same time distant. There are conversations which she would be very open but much of her deep thoughts and feelings she would keep to herself. But if you're on her good side, she would do her earnest to protect you even if it would cause her harm.  She takes a keen interest in knowing and understanding other people. Some would say that she lives vicariously through their experiences to offset the lack of stability in her life. Others might think that she does this so she knows their weaknesses in case that they end up being her enemy.

Raven is loyal to a fault so she takes betrayals of her trust very seriously. She will seek revenge to those who wronged her, oftentimes at their own peril (and sometimes even her own). She has a tendency to sound flirtatious and does this unintentionally and often in a sarcastic manner.  Her teasing can sometimes be misinterpreted as flirting and she balks or runs away at the idea of a romantic relationship (She would, however, flirt in battles just to catch her opponents off guard). This, coupled with her infamous matchmaking habits - Raven might as well be called a walking contradiction.

A bit impulsive but has demonstrated self-control when she deems it necessary. Mina is generally very easy going but don't let her demeanor fool you. In battles, she can be very tricky to deal with - magic or not.

Intro Comic Sketch

I don't plan on introducing Ran and Dani anytime soon. I merely used them so that Mina will have reason to stick around :P But to those who are curious, you can find their dynamic here although this is still very early in their story:

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