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THE INCUBATOR / Re: SilverBlaze's Incubation pod
« on: Jul 30, 2019, 09:09 PM »
Alright, It's about time I started grinding my nose to the canvas and get Pichi ready for VOID. So I took some time and actually finished her ref sheet! It's been a while I know, but I'm going to get Pichi into VOID by Christmas time so help me!

Here's her completed ref sheet.


Now to complete the intro comic!

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THE INCUBATOR / Re: SilverBlaze's Incubation pod
« on: Sep 14, 2018, 08:23 AM »
Just wondering how this sounds, if there's anything I can make sound better.
Since page 3 is currently the page that's not yet been re-sketched, there's chance to design it much better. The current script that's posted here is already the redesigned page script, so it's generally what I'm looking for. I just want to know if it can be improved in some way.

Spoiler: show

PAGE [3] (Pichi's room) (resketch page, dialogue needs work)
  • Panel 1 (Pichi punches the wall)
    • Pichi: “Bitch!”

  • Panel 2 (Cat Butler hands Pichi her coat)
    • Pichi: “She’s a fool for being so complacent.”

  • Panel 3+4 (Pichi puts on her coat and stops in front of the door)
    • Pichi: “Our numbers are declining. Our resources are low.”
       - “I can not trust her to make the right choices anymore.”

  • Panel 5 (Pichi turns her head)
    • Pichi: “If I don’t leave now, everything will be lost.”
       - “Please take care of mother.”
    • Cat Butler: “Of course Ma’am.”

  • Panel 6+7+8 ({Vertical pannels} camera pans from in front of Pichi, over her head as she looks up to the sky and leads to the final page angle)
    • Pichi: (thought) “She wants everything to stay the same…”
       - “The world does not listen to wants…”
       - “But... maybe a wish…”


See previous pages for context.

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THE INCUBATOR / Re: SilverBlaze's Incubation pod
« on: Sep 13, 2018, 09:25 PM »
The 2 speechbubbles in page 2 (Panel 2 and Panel 3) that cut into other panels as well, it confused me as to how I'm supposed to be reading the page, which panel is the next one. And this could be solved by zooming out and/or rearranging the panels composition.

But looks good overall! Cute characters~

Yeah, page 2's bubbles still need some positioning work, and I did see the issue with the second bubble cutting into the "5th" pannel(middle right). I also agree that some of the shots could be pulled back a bit more and a couple tweaks made to the panel shapes as well. Lucky for me, I keep all my panel sketches on their own layers, so editing them isn't really much of an issue. ;b

As for page 1, again, bubble positioning could use a little tweaking before final. But generally, I'm happy with how Page 1 is set up. It's kind of meant to impose a sense of tension. Which is why I've chosen to keep the shots either close to the characters, or at strange semi-tilted angles.
As it goes from page 1 to page 4, the angles become more relaxed and inclusive of the whole area.
Once all the art itself is finished with backgrounds, lighting, and foreground elements, it'll be a little more effective than the sketch page is. :V

Thanks for the critique! I appreciate any and all feedback. ^^

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THE INCUBATOR / Re: SilverBlaze's Incubation pod
« on: Sep 13, 2018, 02:26 PM »
I... I can't... Not read that as if it's being spoken by your icon.

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THE INCUBATOR / Re: SilverBlaze's Incubation pod
« on: Sep 13, 2018, 07:08 AM »
I'll only be submitting Pichi's sheet when I submit her. I also just noticed that the two images look like one image in the post. lol xb

As for the intro comic, The dialogue has been finalized, I still only have the last page 100% complete, but I'll start working on the rest of them again some time this week.
Here's page 1 and 2 in their final layout sketch/semi detail sketch states. Page 3 needs to be completely redone to fit with the script.



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THE INCUBATOR / Re: SilverBlaze's Incubation pod
« on: Sep 12, 2018, 06:28 PM »
Time to get this show back on the road!
I'm getting Pichi Kean back up to speed and I'm going to be submitting her in by the end of the month!
That's my goal! >:U

Anyway. To start things rolling again, I'm going to post in the character information I have.



As you can see, Pichi's ref sheet is not quite finished. I have a few things left to do with it, but it's pretty close to ready.

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VOID Characters and Comics / Re: Official VOID Shitpost Thread!
« on: Jan 05, 2018, 12:02 PM »

I used a god damn mouse for this shit.

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News & Events / Re: Entervoid Promo Commercial Production
« on: Jun 10, 2017, 10:44 AM »
Lol!
Silversterling. XD

Just Silverblaze is fine.
LOOOOOL

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Art Jams / Re: Void Fanart JAM! UPDATE 8/20
« on: May 10, 2017, 10:37 PM »
I just cant get over how amazing these are. they make my day. xb

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THE INCUBATOR / Re: SilverBlaze's Incubation pod
« on: May 09, 2017, 09:41 AM »
Finished the rough sketch of page 3!
Man it was a tough one to figure out that last panel. :V


Time to rebuild Page 1 and 2 to fit the page size.

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THE INCUBATOR / Re: SilverBlaze's Incubation pod
« on: May 09, 2017, 08:53 AM »
I'll be including a human as a height reference on the finished ref sheet.

Not sure if this will count for you guys, but here's a drawing I did in September 2015.

It was part of a fanart pack I was doing. lol

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THE INCUBATOR / Re: SilverBlaze's Incubation pod
« on: May 08, 2017, 03:41 PM »
Working on page 3 of Pichi's intro.
Almost done the rough sketch.
Wanted to make sure I had the most difficult image in the page done first which is why there's the fully coloured Pichi in the middle. lol.

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THE INCUBATOR / Re: SilverBlaze's Incubation pod
« on: May 05, 2017, 07:53 PM »
Finished the last page of the intro comic.
and made some banners.



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THE INCUBATOR / Re: SilverBlaze's Incubation pod
« on: May 05, 2017, 09:15 AM »
Since it's been way too long since I drew Pichi, I decided to do a bit of design editing.

I've shortened her ears for one, and her eyes are a little different.
I've also opted for a softer art style. This also makes it easier for me to finish pages and artwork faster than if I'm doing sharp line-art.


Anyway, I've also started reworking her intro script.
I'm currently working on the final page of her intro, which I'll be working backwards from.

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THE INCUBATOR / Re: SilverBlaze's Incubation pod
« on: Jan 27, 2017, 06:33 AM »
Finally had some more time to sit down and work on these intro pages.




Still got page 3 and 4 to do, but I'm getting there.

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THE INCUBATOR / Re: SilverBlaze's Incubation pod
« on: Jan 12, 2017, 04:40 PM »
Finally had a chance to finish sketching page 1 of Pichi's intro.


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THE INCUBATOR / Re: SilverBlaze's Incubation pod
« on: Jan 08, 2017, 01:23 PM »
I went through about 3 different ideas for the intro comic, and I believe I've hit the jackpot.

Here's a little sketch preview of the first page. I already have all the dialogue for the first 2 pages.


I'm happy with how this is turning out. :3

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THE INCUBATOR / Re: SilverBlaze's Incubation pod
« on: Jan 06, 2017, 09:32 PM »
Finished ref sheet for Pichi. :b



Left the shading off for the ref images for simplicity and to make sure it's easy to read.
Now to finish writing the bio and make the intro comic. :V

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THE INCUBATOR / Re: SilverBlaze's Incubation pod
« on: Jan 05, 2017, 09:15 PM »
It's also a little bit of personal preference. :b

That's all you really need! I mean, if someone's gonna make a furry, they might as well go all the way on self-indulgence.

I'm really liking Pichi's design and palette! She's super cute.

You know it, buddy!
I usually try really hard to explain why things are the way they are with a character, but I've found that leaving some things to the imagination makes for much more interesting characters. It adds a bit of mystery.

There's no need to explain everything, but explain just enough that the character is believable.

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THE INCUBATOR / Re: SilverBlaze's Incubation pod
« on: Jan 05, 2017, 05:06 PM »
Welcome to Void! I have a question that...
Thanks for the question!
She's part of a lineage of magic infused cats, She can speak both cat and understandable language due to this magic...
Cool, it's a great design overall, though, and this isn't a knock against you, I wonder if the voluptuous body is necessary, given that she's a magic-infused cat vs. a human-like cat species
Thanks. I actually have an explanation for that, which will be covered in the intro comic.
But for multiplicities sake, I'll give the gist.

The original magic infused cat looked like an ordinary cat, but over the years they evolved. The evolution was accelerated because of the magic.

I'll be going into more detail with the intro comic.

It's also a little bit of personal preference. :b

So cute! *_*
I love the little kitty logo you made behind her name.

That's the Royal pin. It is handed down to the princess once they are old enough.

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THE INCUBATOR / Re: SilverBlaze's Incubation pod
« on: Jan 05, 2017, 12:53 PM »
Hazzah! Colour and full name!


If you think something could be improved, please let me know. Thanks! :3

Still working on the full ref sheet.

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THE INCUBATOR / Re: SilverBlaze's Incubation pod
« on: Jan 05, 2017, 07:14 AM »
She is soooo cute <3
Is she very small, like huggable cat size? And if so, is she the kind of magical kitty who likes to be cuddled and uses her cuteness to get people to do what she wants?
lol, She is a bit larger than normal cats. Standing at around 2ft. 3in.
As for how she gets what she wants. You'll have to wait to see her intro comic for that. ;b

I will say, however, that she is sly and very manipulative. But that's just normal for cats, isn't it?

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THE INCUBATOR / Re: SilverBlaze's Incubation pod
« on: Jan 04, 2017, 04:44 PM »
Welcome to Void! I have a question that would determine a followup question: Is she meant to be a cat that can stand upright (and/or talk?), or a unique bipedal catlike creature (magical origin? etc.?)
Thanks for the question!
She's part of a lineage of magic infused cats, She can speak both cat and understandable language due to this magic.

A little bit of history: Only a single kitten from a member of this lineage is bestowed with this magic and it is only passed down along the female line. Each member has a unique ability aside from the ability to speak. It is not known when the first magical cat appeared.

Pichi's ability let's her "teleport" in a sense, but only a short distance. Approximately 2.5 yards(7.5 feet) max. When the ability is used, it leaves behind a cat statue in her place.

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THE INCUBATOR / SilverBlaze's Incubation pod
« on: Jan 04, 2017, 02:20 PM »
Howdy doodle, This is a list of all my characters.

Pichi Kean
My current early WIP character.
No colours just yet, but I at least have the characters design down.



Still writing out her bio, but I know she's the princess of the cats living on VOID Cities harbor docks.
She is also very, VERY fast.

Let me know if the images are broken and I'll host them somewhere else. Some people have had issues seeing Gyazo images before.

Also if you have any critique, I am glad to receive it. :3

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New here? / Re: INTRODUCE YOURSELF
« on: Jan 04, 2017, 01:48 PM »
Hi! I'm Sterling-Thorne, but most people call me Silver or Thorne for short.
I've been lurking around VOID for a while, reading all the cool comics that everyone's been making.

I'm an self published comic artist and with a knack for character creation. I'm also a self taught artist, with some help in the very beginning from my brother, who you all may already know, Citronrobotlord.
I currently have a character in the works that I'll be submitting into VOID.

I'm also into a bunch of other artistic things like animation, music and programming. :3

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