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THE INCUBATOR / Re: Nohara's Charas
« on: Jul 08, 2019, 10:28 PM »
A future influencer sounds really cool for a magical power. I'm intrigued and definitely am looking forward to some intro comics!

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Art Jams / Re: The June-July 2019 Blind Date Jam
« on: Jun 26, 2019, 10:12 PM »
Tossing my hat in with Remy

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News & Events / Re: ENTERVOID HEAVYWEIGHT TOURNAMENT 2019
« on: Apr 23, 2019, 02:03 PM »
C'MON AND SLAM

WELCOME REMY TO THE JAM

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THE INCUBATOR / Re: Flytee Incubator
« on: Mar 02, 2019, 04:40 PM »
Yes. HELL YES. I am totally here for this character. :D

This is such a cool concept! I love the idea of psychological manipulation and horror that this character brings. We're so used to alotta physical and brawny voiders, it'll be cool to see this explored and expanded upon. What caliber of craziness lays stored in future opponents heads? I can't wait!

For a demon that's lived through multiple civilizations and eras, I'm wondering about her outfit. Is she the type of demon whose stuck in the past and enjoys wearing dated outfits? Or does she adapt to the times to better fit in? It'd be cool to see her in more modern garb if that's the case. Also considering the prejudices and views in the past, does she disguise herself as human? I don't see a purple horned lady walking around in the bronze age lasting very long.

Also, if she doesnt have the cage can she still collect and dispatch nightmares?

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THE INCUBATOR / Re: 8ball/specimen 8
« on: Feb 25, 2019, 10:45 PM »
Hidey ho and welcome aboard!


First off, I think your paragraphs don't really gel with your character design. Your character comes from a world that's suffered nuclear war, or something like it, but it looks like he's been taken fresh off the factory line. His cape is pristine and doesn't have a any dust, stains or hole/rips in it. Even his mask/face is super clean and white.

Your paragraph says he comes from a dystopian future, but he's wearing fetish gear that was really popular in comics in the 90's. Comparatively, that outfit too is shiny, slick and not weathered or lived in.

If the limiter is a significant item and distinct plot device significant to the character, it might be cool to make it distinct. Give that accessory character so when he takes it off its a big deal and an 'uh oh' moment. As its stands, I didn't even know he had anything of the sort on until I read the paragraph.

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THE INCUBATOR / Re: Pro-roro's Incubator
« on: Jan 08, 2019, 12:19 PM »
While I think the character sheet looks great, I'd fiddle with the BG colors. Your character is so dark, placing them on top of dark colors is muddying this up for me and makes scoping out details and features difficult.

As for your comic pages, they do look promising! It's great to see the foundation work of you getting started on these. I do have a couple notes:

  • The character who's reading off a dossier looks really wooden the way you have them posed. No one really holds papers this way at a desk. Take a picture of yourself reading a sheet of paper. Be mindful of your posture. Are you leaning on an elbow? An arm rest? Is the paper flopping? Really take the time to give that panel some flavor and provide the character some personality. Also consider breaking away from what I call the sidescrolly 'Egyptian' angle on your panels. Try mixing the camera up a little. Maybe we can be viewing this scene over the shoulder, or widen the shot to take in some of the office.
  • When you take it all in, the whole exchange between your character and the one seated at the desk is all the same pose. A tight, constricted panel, with them in profile. It makes the scene look claustrophobic and makes for a boring exchange. You don't always have to focus on them during this. If they're discussing the dossier, maybe dedicate a panel with the a portion of that document showing off something relevant to the conversation at hand. If your character is nervous, or angry during this conversation, a panel showing a clenched fist might be fun. Really anything to break up the repetition of one head two head, one head two head.


Those are really the things that stick out to me. Definitely wish you luck on your progress!

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Art Jams / Re: AWESOME STRIP ADVENTURES
« on: Dec 30, 2018, 05:34 PM »
Adding to the pile



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THE INCUBATOR / Re: Time to incubate
« on: Dec 26, 2018, 08:26 PM »
Deciding what you wanna do first is always the toughest part XD Best of luck streamlining your future intro!

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Art Jams / Re: Skanky Santa Suit Jam (18+?)
« on: Dec 25, 2018, 01:07 PM »
This was such a great ride. THANK YOU ALL for rocking the sassiest and skankiest Christmas yet. Feel free to revisit this jam if yo're still feeling the holiday spirit after december. All of these came out so great!


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Art Jams / Re: Skanky Santa Suit Jam (18+?)
« on: Dec 21, 2018, 09:13 PM »
Remy fires things off!

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Art Jams / Skanky Santa Suit Jam (18+?)
« on: Dec 21, 2018, 09:12 PM »
Calling all Void dudes! Calling all Void dudes!



It's time to suit up in this years latest festive fashion. I've provided a twitter link if you need a closer look. For science, obviously.
https://twitter.com/thepancakehub/status/1066830935214182401


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Art Jams / Re: 2018 Secret Santa!
« on: Nov 24, 2018, 11:59 PM »
Sorry- was in a turkey coma and missed this thread.

I'M IN

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News & Events / Re: •✞|SPEED RESURRECTION TOURNAMENT|✞•
« on: Jun 17, 2018, 08:52 PM »
Entering with my goopty gloop,


Let's get weird, buddy. Let's get weird.


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Art Jams / Re: Blacklight Jam
« on: May 31, 2018, 12:21 AM »

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Art Jams / Re: Tea Party Panic (Secret Santa Style Event)
« on: May 14, 2018, 09:54 PM »
Haha, aww Mimi fits in so well with the sparkles and adorable cuiteness- even with rusty being a little stinker XD Thank yoouuuuu

EDIT:
Also just realized there's a capgras in there too. TOO AWESOME

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Art Jams / Re: VOID SHIPPING JAM [18+]
« on: May 13, 2018, 10:51 PM »
*EXHUMES FROM THE DEPTHS*


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Art Jams / Re: Tea Party Panic (Secret Santa Style Event)
« on: May 13, 2018, 09:00 PM »
I got @Rikun. Sorry bro! XD

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News & Events / Re: *~Magic Mayhem Tournament~*
« on: May 07, 2018, 12:14 PM »
Sorry @SirJellyRaptor :< It was just too close a submission at the final hour to be considered. But thank you all the same!

As for the rest of you- first round of Magic Mayhem is up! I really didn't expect the turnout we got as things were pretty chill and quiet up until the last week. I didn't even get in, but I was more than happy to give up my spot to a fellow magical marauder.

I'm always loathe to have this deliberation with staff and cut really talented and formidable voiders in a tournament and was tempted to just blow this tournament up to include everyone, but them's the breaks. Void has plenty of events and tourneys coming up, so get that sign up trigger finger ready! I appreciate everyone who gave this tournament a look and signed up all the same! Please give our final roster a congrats and follow this magical adventure!

FINAL LINE UP


1. Desichan with Lilyfeather
2. Cats with Cadenza
3. Badger with Talon
4. Ten Dead Kings with Kars
5. Radji with Marie
6. Gregly with Gwen and Regi
7. MyHatsEatsPeople with Wizzie
8. Bobo with Tiffany


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News & Events / Re: *~Magic Mayhem Tournament~*
« on: May 06, 2018, 09:20 PM »
Whatta last minute plot twist!



You people and your mad dash to the finish line! Updated the listing and (barring any super DUPER last minute additions)seeing as there are more entries than spots, looks like we got a tough choice on our hands. Stay tuned!

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News & Events / Re: *~Magic Mayhem Tournament~*
« on: May 05, 2018, 10:31 PM »
Updated the listing- making it rain characters!


Only a little bit of time left to enter and two spots are open. Get em while they're piping hot!

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News & Events / Re: *~Magic Mayhem Tournament~*
« on: May 03, 2018, 10:17 AM »
Haha oh man, @moonlace that is a rad character. Sabs is right tho- if you can whip up an intro comic submitted, I'm sure we can get some mermay magic up in hurr.

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Art Jams / Re: Tea Party Panic (Secret Santa Style Event)
« on: May 01, 2018, 02:28 PM »
Entering with Capgras and Mimi!

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Art Jams / Re: White Party jam
« on: May 01, 2018, 11:26 AM »
I love y'all keeping the white party alive ;3; Everyone looks so danged fancy.

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Art Jams / Re: Rpg Roulette! (Secret Santa Style Event)
« on: Apr 28, 2018, 07:59 PM »
YOOOOO @MrPr1993 I got you my dude! There was no way you couldn't have seen this class coming! >:3c
Hope you enjoy!


Dude, legit this one is BAD ASS and totally my fav.
Lesson learned- I gotta join all the secret santa styled events

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News & Events / Re: *~Magic Mayhem Tournament~*
« on: Apr 27, 2018, 11:41 PM »
There. Updated and listed. Everything in order!




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