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Art => THE INCUBATOR => Topic started by: SnowyMoth on Jun 05, 2019, 09:50 PM

Title: Snowy Incubator
Post by: SnowyMoth on Jun 05, 2019, 09:50 PM
(https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/75ca26e2-8139-4bd8-95e5-4e8f831e689a/dd8nx4t-e1fa8b51-8ad1-431a-a60f-af5e7ca1e0c9.png/v1/fill/w_800,h_929,strp/reference___dairyu_by_melodic_trigger_dd8nx4t-fullview.png?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9OTI5IiwicGF0aCI6IlwvZlwvNzVjYTI2ZTItODEzOS00YmQ4LTk1ZTUtNGU4ZjgzMWU2ODlhXC9kZDhueDR0LWUxZmE4YjUxLThhZDEtNDMxYS1hNjBmLWFmNWU3Y2ExZTBjOS5wbmciLCJ3aWR0aCI6Ijw9ODAwIn1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmltYWdlLm9wZXJhdGlvbnMiXX0.GyWOPKnz1Xvx98CiB9Iu9k0wS4_cTUHawb8hxIDv1Zg)

I've been wanting to join Void for a while, and I've finally gotten around to starting. I'm trying to finish up the intro pages soon here..
Title: Re: Snowy Incubator
Post by: Elyan on Jun 06, 2019, 10:29 AM
Dairyu is an interesting design for sure.
Art looks very good and polished. good luck with your Pages. you are definetely doing this properly :)

what i miss so far is a little background over her place in the world, motivation for actions and personality.

another thing is the second image with red hair. i feel like this is kind of a dynamic of her powers but right now assuming she´s purely air based i´m just confused what that is.

In any case keep going this is looking absulutely swell.
Title: Re: Snowy Incubator
Post by: SnowyMoth on Jun 06, 2019, 02:33 PM
Dairyu is an interesting design for sure.
Art looks very good and polished. good luck with your Pages. you are definetely doing this properly :)

what i miss so far is a little background over her place in the world, motivation for actions and personality.

another thing is the second image with red hair. i feel like this is kind of a dynamic of her powers but right now assuming she´s purely air based i´m just confused what that is.

In any case keep going this is looking absulutely swell.

Thank you so much for the feedback. I'm changing the intro a bit to be more focused on her personality and reason for being in Void, I appreciate you bringing that up!