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Alouisse Ver
# 17   Posted: Nov 1 2017, 10:21 AM
Both: These comics were both funny and hella enjoyable. I enjoyed reading both of them greatly. One week and the both of you really blew it out of the park!


Astro Sean: Really crazy impressive that you were able to do so much while feeling under the weather! I'm sure the little typo's here and there was just a little one-time thing. It did take a few read-throughs just so I could get back to the flow and energy of the comic.

I really dig how the characters interact with one another, and I love the overall vibe I get from this comic. It's funny, the characters are expressive, and I enjoyed how the colors were applied here. Overall, great work!


Camel: I'm in Lu-hu-huuuve with this comic! I genuinely laughed at how it ended. Freaking incredible. The colors, expressions, characters, overall story, and pacing were extremely charming and there's not a single thing I have to say critique-wise. Keep up the amazing work!

# 16   Posted: Oct 30 2017, 06:54 PM
It's been a weird last few days for me, but I wanted to at least say something about this.

Sean: Interesting to see Dale be more mature, in his own way. Dead but still growing up.

Camel: Fantastic setup and punchline. *thumbs up*

# 15   Posted: Oct 30 2017, 03:01 AM
@Sean Dude guy bro-man. I absolutely love seeing Dale. My only concern is *how* he's being used.

To elaborate: Your one-liners and off-hand jokes are the bread and butter of the comic. The little animated bits are independently wacky and full of charm. I think a more strip-comic approach woulda really made this a much more solid comic. Hell, even doubling down on animated-wackiness woulda been rad. If you find a stream of Viva La Bam, you'll really see they pulled out all the stops on bro-dude video-editing and super-imposed nonsense. That's exactly where I think Dale shines best.

@Camel You dialed it to 11 and I never wanna see you dial it down any lower.

Overall this is just what I expected from this matchup and I wasn't disappointed. While the A-story of the comic, The Gravediggers needing Dale to nail this was great, it's really the set-dressing that made it shine. Yog Shoggoth judge, underworld x-games, and the host of ridiculous cameos made this feel X-Treme. (I spit out my gum and started clapping when I saw the Karrin one) In short, nicely done, didn't disappoint, need to see this again.

# 14   Posted: Oct 28 2017, 01:41 PM
sean: we needed that fuckin comic

Camel: never had a deadly accident been so rad (yes! cameo!!)

Global Moderator
# 13   Posted: Oct 27 2017, 07:30 AM
Sean... for a fever induced hell-dream of a comic this is pretty rad, the last panel cracked me up!
camel i think we all agree you owned this battle sorry sean ilu but holy fucking shit i dont think ive ever laughed so hard, story was just insane enough, i loved the ridiculous sound effects and the last panel really made the whole thing im going to laugh about this comic for the rest of my life

# 12   Posted: Oct 26 2017, 10:08 PM
Dale's back!!! :D great comics guys!

Astro your colours.look so nice an harmonious. I enjoyed the short snappiness of this and the way you write Dale's dialogue and actions as a character.theanimayion at the end is a fun touch.

Camel what a while ride! A great short story with wild colours and great atmosphere. The way you built this up with the crowd was exciting and  the overall surreal feeling complimented this. The final panel looks grand and was a good laugh!

# 11   Posted: Oct 24 2017, 06:39 PM
I like the light speed insurance joke and how Dr.Fabolous got a cameo in it, really fun read.

I also really like how Camel made the reference to Gumshoe/strippershoe and Dale's "love interest". And the ending of him being alive only to die in the most brutal yet awesome way possible.

Astro Sean
Approval Committee
# 10   Posted: Oct 24 2017, 09:37 AM
Just wanna say that Camel is the mother fucking beast and his comic was fucking pure gold! Thanks for taking up the challenge, duder!

My comic was sadly only at 50 percent this go around because of catching the flu, but my fever dreaming broken and medicated brain puked this out for ya'll. Thanks again for reading and I appreciate the comments!


Happy November 20th! -Reecer6
# 9   Posted: Oct 24 2017, 08:47 AM
god, these comics were such dumb fun. we need more dumb fun comics on this site. there's absolutely no maximum to the amount of dumb fun one can and should have.

Think Tank
# 8   Posted: Oct 24 2017, 08:05 AM
Yo wow good job you guys, these were amazing!!

Sean, good job at getting this done, knowing how sick you sounded I was really worried, but like wow just congrats! Your pages are really nice, especially for how stressful things sounded like they were going, so congrats on that! >w</ I think the main thing I think you could improve is refining your art a bit. Your backgrounds and compositions are amazing, but I feel like your lines are missing energy, and in a way they don't enhance things as much as they could. In a way they feel a little too clean, and I'm not sure if that fits with the rest of your comic as well as it could. Your colors are good, though I feel like they have potential to be great, if you work on coloring some more. Right now, they look nice, but they don't particularly enhance the comic that greatly, whereas if you look at Camel's comic, it would have a lot less impact without the usage of colors. Overall though, your comic was really nice and your characters look pretty consistent all throughout! And your backgrounds, man those must take a lot of hard work! Kudos on getting up a finished comic after all the sickness, Sean!

Camel, okay omg, whenever I see a cameo, I legit freak the heck out, and that was no different! Fawn looks so cute thankies so much for plopping her into here! >w</// Anyway regarding your comic, your usage of colors are amazing, and its really interesting to see how you draw characters cuz they all look so different. It's pretty impressive! My only issue with that, is it feels like at times some of the characters look a bit lower quality than others as a result, but I mean its amazing either way! And yeah, again those color palettes, they really pop out of the comic, everything is so striking, and visually appealing, and everything even reads well at a single glance, great job!

# 7   Posted: Oct 24 2017, 07:58 AM
I want to let you know that Camel's entry had me DYING from laughter. Nicely placed memes, gorgeous colours, nice dumb cameos.

SEAN MY DUDE, while I didn't quite get the same reaction from your story, your art has been improving so fucking much and I'm super digging your inks!!


# 6   Posted: Oct 24 2017, 07:56 AM
Camel: I love your colors man. And I love your sense of humor. And I ADORE THAT FINAL PANEL. Great flow, hilarious from start to end. You delivered big time.

Sean. You did this while sick and battling another dude? YOu are insane my man. The punchline of your comic got me good.  

Astro Sean
Approval Committee
# 5   Posted: Oct 15 2017, 04:02 PM
Dale is not so secretly the father/mother to everyones love child. It's cannon. Suck it

# 4   Posted: Oct 15 2017, 04:00 PM
I cant wait for this all to be an elaborate setup for the Dale x Klepp Lovechild

Astro Sean
Approval Committee
# 3   Posted: Oct 15 2017, 03:52 PM
This is what happens when people don't wanna fight us 2v2. We gotta beat each other up

# 2   Posted: Oct 15 2017, 03:47 PM
i've been DYING to fight!

Astro Sean
Approval Committee
# 1   Posted: Oct 15 2017, 03:40 PM
Bones Brigade, baby! Let's thrash

Comic Details -

Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Oct 30th, 2017
Votes Cast: 25
Page Views: 703
Winner: Camel

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