My palette is in need of some fine tuning. That is the first comment I've ever had about my intro comic, I appreciate that. I do enjoy putting in the cameos and the background details even though they may not be important enough to the story or telling a story, I might need to avoid too much of that. Thank you Flutterbyes!
Well. Technically it was two with one week extension. So. Not as impressive. I feel like I've left too much unsaid though. Thus a "to be continued". Sometimes I can't help but put in the set embellishments so I am glad they aren't going to waste. Thank you Reecer6.
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Symon - Kudos for the page count! That’s like, more than one fully complete page a day, dang. This comic had lots of little creative decisions I really liked, such as the subterranean apartment (I can’t believe I haven’t seen one in Void before!) and the use of cyan in the flashbacks. Page 10 was especially nice, I liked how clear it was that this mysterious figure was looking through glass at Cynthia and Quint. That reflection was a really nice touch.
I noticed quite a few wacky proportions though, with the heads often too big or too small. You can see an example on the very first page with Cynthia, though it could be that her legs are too short as well. You might want to watch your colours too - individually you make some nice choices, like the aforementioned flashback colours and that sunset on page 7 - but overall they’re a bit dull and blend in with the characters sometimes. The first panel on page 15 for instance; there’s a lot of detail and very similar colours to Quint, such as yellow.