Intro Story / Nagy Tamasz

Intro Story / Nagy Tamasz

Intro Story — Nagy Tamasz

by JCee


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JCee
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# 11   Posted: Aug 20 2019, 09:48 PM
TheCydork: The only issue I can think of is I’m not quite sure whats going on on page 1. We see the caravan and then some kind of nightclub where the caravan is nowhere to be seen. Is it parked outside? I notice the side of it says “bar and club”, so is it magical, and has the entire club inside it despite its size?
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He's camped somewhere in the Central Park area. And yes, the entrance is done through magic. Later on, you'll see how.

      Edited Aug 20 2019,  09:49 PM by JCee

TheCydork
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# 10   Posted: Aug 20 2019, 09:35 PM
Overall this is just a great intro. I really love the colour scheme in these first two pages, and I’m so hype to see more of this guy!!

The only issue I can think of is I’m not quite sure whats going on on page 1. We see the caravan and then some kind of nightclub where the caravan is nowhere to be seen. Is it parked outside? I notice the side of it says “bar and club”, so is it magical, and has the entire club inside it despite its size?

JCee
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# 9   Posted: Aug 19 2019, 03:29 PM
Flutterbyes: It does leave me a little confused about why the comic ends on the note of protecting the family's secrets when he magically intoxicates others freely, but it does still fit in nicely with the air of danger you've given him. I really look forward to seeing more of him.
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It's not necessarily the drinks that he's guarding, it's actually something else that he's referring to, but that's for another time.

      Edited Aug 19 2019,  03:31 PM by JCee

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# 8   Posted: Aug 19 2019, 08:14 AM
This comic so gorgeously establishes a mood and motif for Nagy. I really love the unnatural night club colors and how they contrast with the serene, natural light of the final page, which matches up nicely with the shift in his own demeanor. It does leave me a little confused about why the comic ends on the note of protecting the family's secrets when he magically intoxicates others freely, but it does still fit in nicely with the air of danger you've given him. I really look forward to seeing more of him.

Badger
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# 7   Posted: Aug 17 2019, 12:56 AM
The colors are fantastic, the concept is awesome and I really like Tamasz! The only crit I can think of is that the transition between page 2 and 3 seems abrupt, it feels a bit sudden. Im excited to see more and would love to fight him someday!!

ArtsandGoodies
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# 6   Posted: Aug 14 2019, 07:36 PM
That first page is one of the best single pages i have seen on the site. Also this is definite the next step for your colors. My only crit is that "the next day" textbox confused me since the first two pages didn't seem grounded in any specific day but rather like a general invitation to his club. But that's a minor crit for an amazing comic.

Rivana
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# 5   Posted: Aug 14 2019, 09:39 AM
JCee, what can I say? This is amazing. I can't find any fault in this intro except maybe I just want another page lol.

You managed to give us a very vivid description of Tamasz, his motivations while  adding a dash of mystery in the end. Your drawing and sequential skills are some of the best I've seen in this site. Very inspiring and keep up the good work!

      Edited Aug 14 2019,  09:40 AM by Rivana

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# 4   Posted: Aug 14 2019, 09:29 AM
Love the color palatte in the first two panels and the almost 'UV glow' going on with it. Love the gypsy wagon as well, can't wait to see more!

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# 3   Posted: Aug 14 2019, 07:22 AM
Ohh i got hooked since the first panel!
Good job as always! Can't wait for more :)

Flytee
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# 2   Posted: Aug 14 2019, 02:12 AM
I love this concept. Nagy's intriguing, I'm a sucker for characters with secrets. Plus the setting that comes with him is super cool, and a great additional to canon areas in the city.
The arts fantastic, The neon, surreal colouring really gave me a sense of the bars unusual atmosphere. Especially in contract to that final page. I also really like his design, it has just the right amount of detail and personality...plus you can't go wrong with a pretty boy :V



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# 1   Posted: Aug 13 2019, 10:16 PM
I'M HYPE FOR THIS BOY
Man I don't even have any critiques, I just. Loved this whole thing? The colors, the effects, the setup, the background.... it's all so gorgeoussss. I wanna fight him >:Y

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