2016 Invitational: Round 3 / Ji-ho vs. Lilah & Maddox

2016 Invitational: Round 3 / Ji-ho vs. Lilah & Maddox

2016 Invitational: Round 3 — Ji-ho vs. Lilah & Maddox

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eXed
Artist
21 comments
# 11   Posted: Aug 3 2016, 02:12 AM
WOOOO~! Congrats dotoriii!!! Man that was a crazy ride, just watching the scores go back and forth and stay super close! All the way down to the 1 point difference! Thanks so much for the great match, and good luck in the next round!! Kick some ass!!

dotoriii
Artist
16 comments
# 10   Posted: Aug 3 2016, 02:10 AM
Tysm for all the critiques!! I super appreciate yall telling me what I need to work on. Also holy wow 1 point difference??? I guess i'll be looking forward to my next match up?

eXed
Artist
21 comments
# 9   Posted: Jul 30 2016, 09:57 AM
Thanks for the critiques, guys! I can't wait to keep learning more and working to improve as I go! The week for this match was pretty jam-packed for me, so sadly I didn't get to put as much time and love into the details and backgrounds as I wish I could have! I really hope my speed and everything else will improve the longer I'm here at Void, but for now I'll keep these things in mind for sure!

petarvee
Artist
83 comments
# 8   Posted: Jul 30 2016, 04:26 AM
@dotorii I totally love your colors and how grumpy you make Ji-ho! As a minor thing, when you've got one-color panels like you've got in the fight scene, try tinting the character just a bit so they stand out a bit more. That way the contrast instantly gives your eye something to focus on and we don't have to look around for a bit to figure it out.

@eXed Man, you really tried to fight as much happening in here as you possibly could! The only real crit I can drop is "consistency". Sketched backgrounds don't really mesh well with fully-finished characters. And I figure that's a time-management thing, and dropping backgrounds in is probably last on your list. But, that being said, you totally oughta try working the entire panel til it's done before moving on to the next. Otherwise you'll totally not wanna do what you've left til the end because you've been purposefully avoiding it. But overall, pretty rad!

PyrasTerran
Community Manager
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# 7   Posted: Jul 27 2016, 05:46 PM
dotorii: As evidenced from last round you do a really REALLY good job of making the best out of incomplete work and here's no different. The story is nice and cute, I think you nailed the narrative, just would have loved to see it completed of course.

eXed: You did pretty great here too even with this sepia palette vs your previous colors. Would have liked to see you finish those backgrounds, and I would have liked to see more detail on the goopy monster (more lines for folds, dripping, shiny reflection, etc.)

I don't have too much to say cause you guys are just that good, and only seem to really stumble with completion this round, it's no wonder this is so close

eXed
Artist
21 comments
# 6   Posted: Jul 27 2016, 09:20 AM
AAAAAH! dotoriii I love everything about this! Your comic was so fun to read, and your style is super cute! I literally "d'aww"'d out loud at the end, too! xD I love Ji-ho as a character, and can't wait to see how she continues developing in your comics! The poor restaurant though, LOL!!

Radji
Artist
529 comments
# 5   Posted: Jul 27 2016, 09:11 AM
Dotorii: dat one rad ending
exed: hobo lady...AH

dotoriii
Artist
16 comments
# 4   Posted: Jul 27 2016, 12:03 AM
all uploaded just in time!! I seriously need to manage time better ughhhh i feel bad putting out not so finished content fghgh.. i did my best to make it presentable (and legible!! :'D ). i'm with you eXed! these 1 week deadlines are super rough but i agree that i am learning something! lemme at those critiques i can take them!!

eXed
Artist
21 comments
# 3   Posted: Jul 26 2016, 10:46 PM
Phew all loaded and ready to go~! These one week deadlines are SERIOUSLY rough! I keep find myself wishing I had more time, but I sure as hell do feel like I'm learning a lot already!

dotoriii
Artist
16 comments
# 2   Posted: Jul 20 2016, 11:23 PM
Aaaa i can sympathize with you eXed XD i've got lots of work this week too. I'm so excited to draw Lilah and Maddox! (btw i loved the lil ji-ho cameo in your last comic hehe). I look forward to seeing your comic too!!

eXed
Artist
21 comments
# 1   Posted: Jul 20 2016, 12:28 PM
My work deadlines are a bit heavy this week, but I'm going to give you the best match I can!! Let's have fun with this round! I'm really looking forward to seeing your entry, dotoriii!

Comic Details -

 
Type: Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Aug 2nd, 2016
Votes Cast: 32
Page Views: 864
Winner: dotoriii
 

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