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Punk Jax
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40 comments
# 15   Posted: May 19 2007, 05:59 PM
Holy shit, Lar. I\'m impressed. You\'ve improved more than enough since I\'ve last seen a comic from you. The one thing that reigns in this has got to be the expressions. (especially the last panel 8D)
Alas, nothing\'s perfect and there were many anatomy flaws, many back poses had odd positionings and the arms in some panels didn\'t match length. I can also see you need practice on human heads and females (but hey, so do I). You\'ve probably just won my vote on any future battles, though. The story was, how they say, \"banging\". :3

Mokuu
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85 comments
# 14   Posted: May 17 2007, 05:20 AM
Lar, its time you take anatomy seriously and cram the whole human anatomy in your head without any mercy. I know you want to do cartoon, we all want to do different styles but without the knowledge of realistic human anatomy we wont be able to pull off shit. Same goes with perspective, lightning and composition. You need to get back to square 1, study the fundamentals of realistic art in order to reinforce your style or you\'ll basically end up doing the same thing over and over again without evolving at any point. You\'ll get a better chance here if you take these seriously.

doomsdayblaze
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13 comments
# 13   Posted: May 16 2007, 10:12 PM
Perca made some good comments.  Good storytelling overall, just study with reference, work on using more ruled lines where necessary, and watch your perspective, because it tends to get wonky at times.  Interesting character development, though :)

Chimaeric
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247 comments
# 12   Posted: May 16 2007, 05:21 PM
its good to see that the cullmination story arc is still progressing. I also hope to see the apex of this arc one day also

IWIHASCOE
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178 comments
# 11   Posted: May 16 2007, 04:31 PM
Well, I liked the comic, but just one thing bothered me too much: the same choice of angle over and over. The paneling is ok, colors helped to get the lineart more solid and the story was nice. Just those repetitions of close ups and such made me be a lil meh about the comic. I believe that you can try different stuff next time, as Void is the right place for doing so. About the human anatomy and the backgrounds... well, I can tell that it takes a while to improve on those, but I bet you can do it. From your past work I can see some improvement already. Just let go and lose your mind experimenting new stuff.

Kozispoon
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1046 comments
# 10   Posted: May 16 2007, 02:05 PM
Hoom- comment time! =D

I rather liked the story, despite its staggering bias. The ending made for a hallmark \'be open-minded\' moment. The coloring was solid and pretty clean and as usual, your work on Larathen is very detail oriented and careful- which leads me to wonder why you dont use that same passion with the rest of the aspects in your comic. Backgrounds, other characters, human anatomy- they need similar love too.

Inferno
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40 comments
# 9   Posted: May 16 2007, 12:04 PM
psh heros rght silly humans lol
nice job lar

Hero Karma
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51 comments
# 8   Posted: May 14 2007, 09:28 AM
Silly humans, lizards don\'t have fur.

c-r-ill-er
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101 comments
# 7   Posted: May 14 2007, 08:22 AM
That was pretty good Lar. nice i think you did a great job on the colors, the plot wasn\'t bad and you did the back rounds great. The layout was good as well.

Gakidou
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18 comments
# 6   Posted: May 14 2007, 04:00 AM
Simple, and an unusually good read.

ablondin
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33 comments
# 5   Posted: May 14 2007, 02:53 AM
I though this was a lot better than your other works. I enjoyed reading it. practise more humana, blah blah blah, all that jazz.

Monday
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932 comments
# 4   Posted: May 14 2007, 12:28 AM
part time jobs should refresh it.

Larathen
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182 comments
# 3   Posted: May 14 2007, 12:06 AM
I am going to do a part 2 on this. College killed my libido to finish this.

Monday
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932 comments
# 2   Posted: May 13 2007, 10:10 PM
clean and simple , good job on this. Im actually demanding continuation here. Try not to overplay the \"I\'m a social reject\" angle too much on future entire for the sake of variety.

Qyzex
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670 comments
# 1   Posted: May 13 2007, 08:25 PM
Larathen, I was pretty impressed. you still need to work on your humans, but yeah, i actually liked this!

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