Dr. Ethos vs. Bhaav & Maansik

Dr. Ethos vs. Bhaav & Maansik

Dr. Ethos vs. Bhaav & Maansik

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Kuro
Artist
581 comments
# 18   Posted: Feb 5 2011, 03:31 AM
Generally thought this was pretty good. The line width/drawing size ratio is something you should consider for future battles. A few times here it seemed a little too chunky, but I think if you just practiced at it you'll get more proficient. Just find a size that works for you. Small number of panels per page means generally clear story telling which is very good, but if anything, I think you overused the splash a little too readily. Sure it's 14 pages, but how many splash pages? It's good for an effect but if you go to the well too many times, it loses its luster.

Penryn88
Artist
76 comments
# 17   Posted: Feb 3 2011, 04:43 PM
thanks for all the feedback guys i really appreciate it!

carlito
Artist
375 comments
# 16   Posted: Feb 3 2011, 10:44 AM
I really, really liked this and thought it was your best work so far... keep drawing man! You get better and better each fight. I hope you battle again soon and just stay active.
 The plot and the art and the overall "feel" of the comic (and last one too actually) we're just super well done and fleshed out. I really enjoyed Chia-Hui and Jaz in it too... we haven't quite got the 'Gang' off the ground, but it's a good ensamble and works really well! Good work, and keep it up.

The Bent One
Artist
564 comments
# 15   Posted: Feb 2 2011, 06:36 AM
Fern:
- one solution to that is drawing your pages much bigger IRL than what it is meant to be ;)
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I am doing this for my first comic (The Pattern, it IS coming soon). I'm drawing on 11 x 17 paper and then after scanning shrinking it down to the 800 px width. it makes the detail seem much more impressive.

Fearn
Artist
349 comments
# 14   Posted: Feb 2 2011, 01:28 AM
Penryn88:
yes i totally agree with that, i like using a brush pen but i can be "heavy handed" at times. I'm glad you like it though.
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- one solution to that is drawing your pages much bigger IRL than what it is meant to be ;)
But I actually loved the thick lines too.

This was awesome btw. This was like the best comic I have read for a while, and I completely didn't expect this serious story as normally I find your comics quite light hearted (if this wasn't the case for a while now, blame it on my lack of presence here for a while). I  don't actually have much to say, I am dying for the rest of the story!!

Chia
Artist
82 comments
# 13   Posted: Feb 1 2011, 07:07 PM
Small pages but big panels, that kinda bothers me because it doesn't seem like an actual "page" to me. Though I liked the thick lines, adds a lot of character to your drawings I think.

AJ 武士龍
Artist
66 comments
# 12   Posted: Feb 1 2011, 01:51 PM
Penryn88, your story plot is one of the best i have read in a while...I wasn't expecting that!
Also good use of Bhaav & Maansik, as well the others.
Powerfull comic, man!

BrainBaists, man i love Bhaav & Maansik, i was eager to see your side too...well, i know sometimes decisions are a pain in the @55 :/

PyrasTerran
Community Manager
1436 comments
# 11   Posted: Feb 1 2011, 11:01 AM
I actually liked the thick lines in this one.

This was definitely a different take on Baahv & Maansik's persona as it were~

Penryn88
Artist
76 comments
# 10   Posted: Feb 1 2011, 09:04 AM
My one comment about this is that you should work on your line weights. Everything was a bit to thick.
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yes i totally agree with that, i like using a brush pen but i can be "heavy handed" at times. I'm glad you like it though.

The Bent One
Artist
564 comments
# 9   Posted: Feb 1 2011, 08:38 AM
Penryn88, this was BALLIN'! I hope Dr. Ethos won't be too dissapointed when he learns that that books only chronicles Baahv & Maansik's doings on this level of the pattern...

My one comment about this is that you should work on your line weights. Everything was a bit to thick.

Penryn88
Artist
76 comments
# 8   Posted: Jan 31 2011, 09:58 PM
uploaded

cultmasterflex
Artist
125 comments
# 7   Posted: Jan 13 2011, 06:55 AM
damn son

Nex in a Box
Artist
45 comments
# 6   Posted: Jan 13 2011, 03:03 AM
sadly i cannot do this comic...... my preparation for school has given me no time. it saddens me. i shall come back to this in the future.

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1057 comments
# 5   Posted: Jan 5 2011, 05:43 PM
Brain, you're always doing stuff, it's so cool.

Can't wait to see what you're gonna do too, Penryn.

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1057 comments
# 4   Posted: Jan 5 2011, 05:43 PM
Brain, you're always doing stuff, it's so cool.

Can't wait to see what you're gonna do too, Penryn.

Nex in a Box
Artist
45 comments
# 3   Posted: Dec 29 2010, 08:45 AM
with your last comic dr. ethos has become one of my favorite characters on the site with character development. I am very excited about this comic.

Penryn88
Artist
76 comments
# 2   Posted: Dec 29 2010, 07:15 AM
I'm excited to see how you write Ethos Brain, I'm gonna try some new stuff on this fight. Some things I've been meaning to do for a while now, i hope it works out.

The Bent One
Artist
564 comments
# 1   Posted: Dec 27 2010, 10:24 AM
Brain, stop being so industrious, you creative bastard.

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Drawing Time: 4 weeks
Ended: Feb 7th, 2011
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