Leo vs. Ru

Leo vs. Ru

Leo vs. Ru

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Dimension
Artist
489 comments
# 19   Posted: Apr 7 2009, 12:48 PM
JoshuaEliGilley  covered most of the things I was going to say sooooo...just I just want to say nice battle guys! the story was pretty entertaining and the art was solid on both sides. Very nice work.

had to give the vote to schupfnudel though, also nice first battle for Leo :)

JoshuaEliGilley
Artist
462 comments
# 18   Posted: Apr 5 2009, 02:41 PM
Nice story collabo guys,  for a little more closure, I would have liked if we returned to the laundrymat and modern setting a bit longer for the ending.

shupf:

Man this was a great debut, i'm siked about more comics from ya! the art was nice, really detailed bgs as well as figures, I tip my hat to yah. Some areas the lines looked a bit jaggy tho, maybe experiment with how you compress your pages for web. Also the sound effects seemed to seperate themselves from the rest of the style, wish I could tell you why! maybe more open space inside the letters with some color in spots for variety/impact.  excellent scenes/pacing as well, keep that up.

marin

I also enjoyed your scenes/pacing, the action was readable and looked good. pg 4 last panel was kind of confuising tho, maybe a more side angle or if he stabbed him and we saw the blade poke out the back or if he slashed him totally in half the action would be clearer. The quality suffered because you didn't finish but solid linework throughout. storywise like i said, would have liked a little more char. interaction between the 2 in modern times to close it out, trannsporting us back to the present.

both of these kicked ass! nice work.

odd13
Artist
109 comments
# 17   Posted: Apr 4 2009, 06:57 AM
Good work from both of ya', both did well with the overall storyline. It was fairly entertaining with a good balance o' dialog and scenes. Well I have no further critique, well done with z' round. c:

Kuro
Artist
581 comments
# 16   Posted: Apr 2 2009, 12:03 PM
while the modern day backgrounds looked a little too simple & line-tool-y, these were really quite nice. no real significant complaints. although you'd think a laundromat would have it so the title on their window would read to people on the outside as opposed to the customers they've already attracted haha. nah, good work schup; nice upping your game, marin

amazingdavid
Artist
441 comments
# 15   Posted: Apr 1 2009, 10:26 PM
So...these are some of the dopest comics Ive seen on Void in a while...

I don't really have time right now for a formal critique but on the short...

Ru: A MILLION BILLION times better than your last battle...this is some seriously good work from you...too bad you didnt get to finish...time management yo...

Schup: AMAZING...I'm a new fan of yours...hope to battle you someday...

overall I enjoyed both stories the art was top notch..had to tip the scales to Schup for finishing but seriously...quality wise that was the only difference...excellent entries from both of you.

Darius Corry
Artist
427 comments
# 14   Posted: Apr 1 2009, 01:31 PM
Dope color play to the both of you.

Sleezmeister
40 comments
# 13   Posted: Apr 1 2009, 10:03 AM
I'm really startin to like Leo and his outfit is pretty awesome in this.

marinduquenio
Artist
60 comments
# 12   Posted: Mar 31 2009, 11:44 PM
gah just in the nick of time

marinduquenio
Artist
60 comments
# 11   Posted: Mar 31 2009, 11:31 PM
damn!!!!!!!!!!! thisi is not good.

marinduquenio
Artist
60 comments
# 10   Posted: Mar 31 2009, 09:59 PM
waah I can't upload!

schupfnudel
Artist
18 comments
# 9   Posted: Mar 31 2009, 08:20 AM
Uploaded!! This has everything you want in a comic my friends ... Bad humour (so bad that it's bad), botched perspective, nonexistant bgs et cetera ... Urgh ... I'll go catch some z's now ...

Ps Thanks for your comments =)

carlito
Artist
375 comments
# 8   Posted: Mar 16 2009, 10:40 AM
I'm pretty excited for Leo's comic!!!!
Good luck to you both.

voidstone333
31 comments
# 7   Posted: Mar 7 2009, 11:58 PM
marinduquenio:
procorpio: aw c kuya wan pla 2 hahahhaa musta n po
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ahh sino to? hehehe
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la lng kilala lng kita hehehe

marinduquenio
Artist
60 comments
# 6   Posted: Mar 6 2009, 05:28 PM
procorpio: aw c kuya wan pla 2 hahahhaa musta n po
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ahh sino to? hehehe

Wolcik
Artist
492 comments
# 5   Posted: Mar 5 2009, 12:36 PM
Good Luck, this will be nice to watch :)

JoshuaEliGilley
Artist
462 comments
# 4   Posted: Mar 4 2009, 07:36 AM
COOOOL!! good match, looking forward to both sides

voidstone333
31 comments
# 3   Posted: Mar 4 2009, 01:14 AM
aw c kuya wan pla 2 hahahhaa musta n po

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 2   Posted: Mar 3 2009, 06:41 PM
Looking forward to this!

Monday
Artist
934 comments
# 1   Posted: Mar 3 2009, 05:57 PM
hey , this is interesting.


Comic Details -

 
Drawing Time: 4 weeks
Ended: Apr 7th, 2009
Votes Cast: 32
Page Views: 2028
Winner: schupfnudel
 

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