<b>Qyzex:</b> that had been already said, but hell, you improved a lot form your old stuff, I\'m impressed as well :´D Your story was funny and nice to read, the only thing that bothered me (again someone already said this ) Is the repetition of full body shots, that made the comic a lil boring to read, in my (modest) opinion. The lines are clean and I enjoy your use of grays

<b>Fence:</b> your...expressions...are.... amazing. I hate you for that :´D The story was simple, clean and great. Your hatch/inks are also great but as Craqued said... you should use black more often. The rest... I don\'t have more to complain, as I do believe that the less usage of background is suitable on your comic (dunno why but I think so XD - maybe cuz it gives much more simplicity for the comic and and gahhh). When I join... you and me. Jo ken pô match!

Qyz- You better stick with this story.  It\'s going somewhere interesting, and has the potential to be quite entertaining.

Fence- I like it.  Maybe more establishing shots/backgrounds would help, but I dunno, the simplicity is nice.

VERY PLEASED INDEED

 I\'m going to go ahead and agree with Kozi about Finnegan\'s debut comic. It was simple and quirky with great charcterization. Fence, seriously, this was too cute. I was laughing at the littlest things, like Merk\'s creepy, shifty expressions. In the future, you might want to step it up in regard to your backgrounds, but this was a great start.

Qyzex- you are a horrible, horrible perverted person and I love you for it. This was a big step up for you, art-wise. You made an honest attempt at some detailed backgrounds, and for that I salute you. Merk is a completely thoughtless, arrogant jerk and I could not help but laugh at him bossing around the rest of Jingles\'s minions. Maybe you should have spent a little more time working up Finnegan\'s character, but it was a solid entry overall. Nice.

Huzzah! Finnegan debut- and what a debut! Your scratchy style really gives your pages character Fence. I really dug how you layed your composition out. Nice and cleany-like. Not to mention you make Merk look adorable. The shifty eyes was hilarious. I know some have said your story was rather simple, but I really liked it. Finnegan doesnt strike me as holycrapamazing just yet. He seems like a regular joe and seeing him use his ability for something so everyday was, to me, a fitting introduction.

Besides seeing my squirrel whizzing on the carpet, you\'ve improved a lot on your entry. And I\'m impressed by it.

However, I liked fence\'s entry more, she did such great expressions in this. Great job, both of you.

im impressed with your entry qyzex it shows a definate improvement over your other stuff.

Q, your\'s was funny, I liked seeing all the group shots and that masked man character was cool. I\'d like to see more background shots though and less of the same full body shots because that\'s pretty much all you had.

Fence, your\'s was really funny because of how simple it was, and the dialog reminds me of stuff I\'d say, it was just real natural. Some of your lines were real sketchy or light, make use of more black (I need to learn the same haha) but yea, awesome first fight, it was a fun read.

yea I know mine is rather weak storywise, I was having trouble with that.

but but I wanna know what happens next in Qyz\'s! CLIFFHANGER

oh man, Fence. I loved yours. I laughed at the weirdest things too... like \"You\'re blocking the light...\" I laughed for some stupid reason! GAHA

fence you got your frist battle in good job, but both of you need to make the plots harder, the backround needs more in it, it\'s void you can do what ever you want just think striper and other good think like that. both just needs a little more work and you guy got it...

sorry about that, I thought they had gone in and wei told me otherwise today. it\'s in though, soorrryyy

So am I gonna get both entries or what? I have only one and we are a day past. If I don\'t have it tonight and don\'t hear anything about it then I\'ll assume its a default and put this up.

jesus... it\'s been super hectic/crazy/busy/stressful/painful/BARF this last week and a half...

but, it should be done. I count on it.

KICK THE SHIT- i mean go dudes! can\'t wait to see this one!

also i know what Kozi means, i have a friend with \"Finnegan\" for a last name and i\'m always yellin \"___ FINEGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN\"

Eee Merk! Wheee Finnegan (C\'mon, who else has WAY too much fun saying this fighters name out loud?)! May is indeed going to be an awesome month- so many great battles ending then I\'m rooting for ya Merk! *tosses her panties at him* D:

rock, paper winer, or loser who will win. i think that this might be a nice battle, i guess i\'ll wait to read into it...

GO QYREX GO

I concur with RTV. Make it hot and frisky like we know you can!
Fence, best of luck to you on your character\'s first battle.

WHOA! MAKE IT SEXY GUYS!

Welcome to Void, fence.
Q, i hope your battle isn\'t gonna face deletion again.

<-- is pleased.

KICK HIS ASS FENCE >:|

Whoop whoop!

YEY

Oh boy, oh boy. Rock paper skizzas time.

I can\'t wait to see how it all goes down. Both of you have some good junk to work with comedically using eachother\'s characters, so I want to see some mass hilarity.

Here\'s hoping that your first battle goes well. : D

oh boy oh boy FIRST BATTLE
this is exciting!

ps. Merk is totally going down.