AJ: This is such an awesome style to see and I love these inks are fantastic in particular I love all the small lines you do for shading and texture as well as the subtle gray. Only thing I can really say is the action was over before it even started. on my first read through of page 4 i was a little confused since I thought the final panel was following the knife and didn't realize that was Hyperion's beam. Since you have done a bunch of exposition with this comic and the prelude comic hopefully your next comic can focus on the action because I really want to see more action from your comics with your amazing style.

 Dear Voiders THANKS TO ALL who voted and critiqued, it means A LOT to me, as I believe everyone can improve his skills, and i'm no exception! I'll have in mind your inputs on my future comics!

 @Pepper: Pepper, as I told you by personal message, The Blade Princess was one of the contenders I was praying to fight against, I found her very interesting, I wish there were more comics of her here on Entervoid ( I hope you continuing in developing this O.C in B.B's ) , and it was delightful to have this opportunity!
 Also, I want you to know that 1 week battles still make me nervous, normally, I like to take my time doing comic projects, I still think I should explore your O.C a bit more in my comic side!

About the default, just want to say I understand, real life happens, I too was about an inch to show a lesser good, sloppier pages, as job and family also demand attention.
 About "that 'void' comic page thing" you can find it in the Resources & Tutorials section, courtesy of our member The Bent One!

 @Corn Of The Breads: I'm glad you liked the pages man, thank you for the kind words.

 @Hellis: Thanks a lot for the support Hellis, I just want to say to you, if Hyperion revives, get my 2 favourite space outlaws Hara and Huey ready man!

@The Bent One: Bro thanks for your comment, this 1 week comics always get me anxious, and I end up rushing up the sketching process, for the sake of not overthink too much, and therefore losing precious time...that sometimes translates in wrong panel choices... ( time is my nemesis )
 Another thing, thanks a lot for putting available here on the site your comic page template, it is AWESOME!

I thought I recognized that from somewhere. I bumped the thread post, it's in the Resources & Tutorials sub-forum.

 @Heathen: Man, it meant the world to me your commentary, as I found you as one of the great artists over the site actually! Also thanks for the heads up, fonts wise...

 @Reecer: Thanks man, I've been away from void in the last years due to life decisions, but I intend to change that in the future! About Hyperion, follow the next episode and your wish will be granted

AJ: As a newbie, I haven't seen your style before, but DANG does your style feel as nice and traditionally welcoming as a log cabin. But like, a really good log cabin. One with plumbing and cable. Just very professional stuff, and I super love the mock paper! But I guess that was in your intro as well. However, it's disappointing that there's so little conflict in this, with Hyperion basically squashing a bug as he lands on Earth. Hopefully this tiny scene is going to at least build to something greater!

Pepper: Maybe one day we'll see what Blade Princess looks like. Oh! We will! Neat!

AJ: After seeing your previous BB, yours was the first comic I looked for in this tourney, and it didn’t disappoint.

While your dialogue balloons are looking better, some of your font choices are rubbing me wrong. When your comics have a more professional or mainstream quality than most, your fonts are really going to make or break you.

Pepper: Looking forward to seeing your side of this, and welcome back! Get a new character in here!

Can’t wait for round 2! Hail, Hyperion!!

AJ: Thanks for this. Pretty awesome.

There is a ton of detail here, I feel like this could have really benefited from some shading to add more depth, but still, having looked over your older stuff, it's clear you have made progress since last you posted. XD

Also, I need that 'void' comic page thing... where can I find it? X3

In the meantime, good luck on the next round. Going to try to stick around this time, since I've been needing to get back on the comic creation train again... I missed the cut off time, but I will be posting later this week (really been exhausted the last couple of days, going to rest first, then clean up pages since it's going to be a bb).

AJ: Gotta love an old fashioned power blast disintegration. The setup is a bit simple, but it's well drawn and moves along at a good pace. I'd love to see more heavy lines in your inking. Page 3 has some problems with composition and use of space. Panel 1 could be more dynamic, maybe switch the camera 180 degrees to show Hyperion floating in the air as a silhouette with his power beam charging. the last panel of that page feels confusing, since the actual impact of the blast is crammed down into the corner of the panel and confined by the winged horse and Blade Princess breaking out of the previous panel. I feel like this could be improved by giving the blast hitting Blade Princess more room and showing the winged horse flying away in the background. I'm looking forward to the next comic!

Aj: Hyperion is such a badass. I am loving these pages, the way you convey movement and the way you set up pacing is very effecient and impactfull as whole.

This is just some good ol fashioned comic book fun!

*cracks knuckles*
Lets see if Pepper can make an awesome (or at least dece) return after all these years *waves hi to old friends*