Girl and dog vs. Bob the Destroyer

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Rocul

15 comments

# 17 Posted: Sep 2 2008, 05:15 PM

Very very entertaining!! Good job!!!

luniara
Artist

528 comments

# 16 Posted: Sep 2 2008, 12:40 PM

DX nuuu fence! I was all excited and stuffs!!
Keep in mind that you could always e-mail your stuffs if the uploader was given you troubles.

Good try though. <3

neens
Approval Committee

266 comments

# 15 Posted: Sep 2 2008, 12:27 PM

and Shintsuu that was cute aww
I actually liked the crazy anatomy in some instances, and the colour was nice and everything was easy to read and stuffs

michaelharris
Artist

353 comments

# 14 Posted: Sep 2 2008, 12:22 PM

I really liked it my only complaint would be just to have better anatomy and backgrounds. Nice work.

neens
Approval Committee

266 comments

# 13 Posted: Sep 2 2008, 12:13 PM

yea about that. I have no internet, so I can\'t upload all nimbly pimbly whenever I want. I did try yesterday, but nothing was going in my favor so, sorry.

Kon
Artist

194 comments

# 12 Posted: Sep 2 2008, 11:48 AM

FENCE I AM GONNA CRY.

Shintsu> I must admit this is one of the best battle I\'ve seen in a long while, quality wise it\'s not ace but it looks really good. This was entertaining, funny and the story was well done. You tried an easy concept and it worked really well. Also Bob wasn\'t a character I REALLY LIKED, I was a bit \"uhhh\" about him but the interest grew so fast in me while reading your stuff.
Their is no comparison between your black and white and colored stuff to me. I wanna see more of your shit because it kicks asses.

So you\'ll get awesome vote from me.

Angie
Council

1937 comments

# 11 Posted: Sep 2 2008, 11:03 AM

Shintsu-It took a little while to get used to seeing your stuff in color and I wasn\'t sure if I liked it at first but by the end of the fight it grew on me. It would be cool to see a coloring style more suited for your energetic lineart but what you had worked well enough. Story wise it wasn\'t crazy original but it was entertaining and I enjoyed it. I think the big thing to watch for right now is your anatomy. It really jumps all over the place and can be pretty inconsistent. While I understand that probably has to do with the energetic style, try to at least keep things like arms and legs of the same character consistent. It was a pretty cute battle and I enjoyed it