I love that you took all of us in the void discord chat on a journey seeing this intro go from concept to finish. You were really excited for this character and your turnaround for slapping us with this intro shows. You tried some new techniques and concepts with this, and I for one commend you on that. It's not easy to get experimental-especially if you don't know if it'll work or not, but its cool you're brave enough to just wing it and see how it turns out.
Love love love this story. If anything, your concepts for characters and narratives are your biggest strength. Its what keeps me coming back to read your work and seeing the character development. Unfortunately your art isn't there yet, but I do appreciate your work ethic and how you doggedly push to do better.
I'm looking forward to your first battle (and seeing this guy on Dash's roof)
Intro Story / Nomad
Critiques & Comments
# 4
Posted:
Feb 24 2019, 07:28 PM
# 3
Posted:
Feb 24 2019, 02:11 PM
Oooh A new werewolf OC, I am pumped. I dig the watercolor look, but sometimes it looks a little muddy. Maybe there isn't enough color variation in the sky, ground, and cliffwalls. Maybe it could use a little detail here and there like clouds or some leaves of grass? Maybe even some color gradients to break up the monotony.. I really dig that first panel of pg 1. I like the use of perspectives. It's very clear the pack is leading him into a trap. I feel like the large panel in the bottom of page 2 is an excellent perspective to give alot of information to the reader. Great job! Looking forward to more!
# 2
Posted:
Feb 23 2019, 07:03 AM
Hellis! Your turnout for this was fast and its very good! I am seeing your improvement with each comic!
I hope to fight this cool guy someday!
I hope to fight this cool guy someday!
# 1
Posted:
Feb 23 2019, 03:12 AM
Interesting creature concept. Is it based on a real mythos? It's like the myth of the Selkie, but with a wolf, and mixed with some asian lore that always mix the consummation of human flesh by some animal to create monsters. Like it !
Beyond Battle
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Mar 1st, 2019
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