The Bag Lady vs. Ashes
Critiques & Comments
# 16
Posted:
Jul 31 2006, 01:22 PM
Daaaaang, this is close. I kinda made a \'waaaah?\' face when I saw the pecentages. I jitter for the end of this to come.
# 15
Posted:
Jul 31 2006, 12:39 PM
Both of your have a black and white look, but I am a huge fan or pen work and a sketched look, my own bias at work there.
Both are entertaining- both interesting characters.
Berlin is creative in literary ideas- but you need to find a better way to incorporate them into your panels.
Both are entertaining- both interesting characters.
Berlin is creative in literary ideas- but you need to find a better way to incorporate them into your panels.
# 14
Posted:
Jul 28 2006, 03:00 PM
I\'m loving Berlins story, but I\'m also digging the style Ashes used throughout his(her?) pages.
Nice work you two.
Nice work you two.
# 13
Posted:
Jul 28 2006, 07:48 AM
Feel free to use that.
This is a close ass fight, yo.
But I think the beyond the battle that happens after this will be fine starting with the BagLady crawling out of the Horrible Horrible bag...yep.
This is a close ass fight, yo.
But I think the beyond the battle that happens after this will be fine starting with the BagLady crawling out of the Horrible Horrible bag...yep.
# 12
Posted:
Jul 28 2006, 07:30 AM
Intersting Mr. Poe, Interesting. I wouldent doubt there could be more than one of Ashes. Seems logical as vauge as she is.
# 11
Posted:
Jul 25 2006, 08:19 PM
I enjoyed both equally and gave you each equal votes. :3
BP: Nice art, a little messy- but nothing too bad. Panel struction was kinda bland, had more of a long comic-strip feel to it than a comic book. Try using different panel placement.
sdsj: Your style is grungy and dark, which works very well for your character. Story was a bit simplistic, but in all it was fun.
BP: Nice art, a little messy- but nothing too bad. Panel struction was kinda bland, had more of a long comic-strip feel to it than a comic book. Try using different panel placement.
sdsj: Your style is grungy and dark, which works very well for your character. Story was a bit simplistic, but in all it was fun.
# 10
Posted:
Jul 25 2006, 07:20 PM
I had a question about what you thought about there being more than one Fear Hate Elemental and also it being in Auschwitz?
# 9
Posted:
Jul 25 2006, 07:03 PM
Y\'know what\'s real annoying about those sketch marks? I actually fixed them...I just didn\'t repost...ah well...too late now...
# 8
Posted:
Jul 25 2006, 06:32 PM
Good work Berlin Poe, I like your story, and the end was cool! (though ours are a little different in baggage handling!) I like some of your compositions specifically page 4 panel 2. You might want to watch your perspective a bit and your pages seem to have pencil lines that aren\'t fully taken out, (watch your levels?) Otherwise I\'d say thumbs up if I could vote on it!
# 7
Posted:
Jul 25 2006, 05:08 PM
So, this is \"The Soup Kitchen\" Act two...Act three is going to be a beyond the battle and four is BagLady V Paige. So that we are all clear...
# 6
Posted:
Jul 23 2006, 05:57 PM
Well, I\'ve uploaded 4 pages and a cover. Have at thee! I cant wait to see your pages Poe.
# 5
Posted:
Jul 9 2006, 01:24 AM
Okay, I\'m all uploaded.
Seven pages one cover. I didn\'t think I\'d be done so quick.
Seven pages one cover. I didn\'t think I\'d be done so quick.
# 4
Posted:
Jul 8 2006, 11:29 AM
Well I\'m trucking on this. I have only one maybe two pages and it\'s done. Five or Six pages one cover.
Yep.
Yep.
# 3
Posted:
Jul 7 2006, 08:32 AM
Hungry, hungry, horrible, horrible bags!!
Fun for the whole family, in stores near hell...
Fun for the whole family, in stores near hell...
# 2
Posted:
Jul 4 2006, 09:49 PM
I think so too...interesting to say the least.
# 1
Posted:
Jul 4 2006, 07:31 AM
whoa gonna be awsome
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
3 weeks
Ended:
Aug 1st, 2006
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51
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Berlin Poe
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