Azriel vs. Danielle
Critiques & Comments
# 8
Posted:
Jun 21 2007, 10:59 PM
HAHA nice Loki nice. Az is always fun to see in your comics, he\'s so adorable. Too bad your opponent def\'d it but HEY the more practice the better you\'ll get. Your choice of colors is nice and fits the mood of the comic for the most part. The paneling in some places was kind of confusing, not too bad, but it was just...unattractive the way it was placed. Maybe simplify more on those panels, use the basics and get the feel of how they\'re supposed to work before you start contorting them. Your outlining is real nice too, pretty clean and the weight of them is good. Nice backgrounds too! More detail would be nice though. As for your drawing in general, your humans are getting better but keep at the life drawing and YEP smooth sailing. Thanks for the entertaining comic, man.
# 7
Posted:
Jun 21 2007, 06:24 PM
Master Loki, I think this is your best work yet. There\'s still issues with your wobbly people and your weird-looking faces, but your art is getting more and more readable with every entry. Also, nice colors. I also liked the funny-yet-sentimental story.
And NeoIcarus: boy, do I hate you right now.
And NeoIcarus: boy, do I hate you right now.
# 6
Posted:
Jun 20 2007, 03:39 PM
yar, children can be so cruel =<
i feel bad for that teacher >.> that first kid is a creepy one
i feel bad for that teacher >.> that first kid is a creepy one
# 5
Posted:
Jun 16 2007, 01:54 PM
Well submitted. >__o I tried out the style of writing/coloring that I\'m more accustomed to, which is new to me with Void. Hope it turns out okay. Can\'t wait to see yours Icarus.
# 4
Posted:
Jun 12 2007, 10:42 PM
Whut? Only three comments?? But... Danielle\'s my favorite! ;_;
# 3
Posted:
May 26 2007, 12:46 AM
smash some hipbones you guys
# 2
Posted:
May 22 2007, 07:13 PM
Icarus you kraaaazeh.
# 1
Posted:
May 22 2007, 03:41 PM
battle of cute, OH NO.
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
4 weeks
Ended:
Jun 27th, 2007
Votes Cast:
27
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1475
Winner:
Master Loki
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Rabbit: Thanks, this entry felt more natural to me and I really enjoyed doing something not totally comedic but somewhere in that good balance. : ) Glad I’m improving.
Craqued: : ) Thanks for the comment Craqued, it’s nice to know I can count on you for one. Agh, I suppose that working more on my thumbnails could probably help me out some more with the paneling as usually it is the thing I have the least patience for, though I really should change that. :/ Yup, constantly working at what I can in the time period I have and thanks for the comment again. : )