[Edit] Added her Bio, it's subject to change in the future
Hello everyone, thought I'd drop my first character in here for some feedback. Her design is pretty much set, but I do want to know how I could improve in any way. Any critiques would be great.

All critiques are welcomed! Thanks in advanced


Bio: Vyxen is a seasoned mercenary who's been fighting on the front lines ever since she was young. Much of her past is kept silent, as she doesn't like going into it. Only a select few whom she trusts remain know of her troubled past and the mistakes that led to her exile from the Draconian military. Putting all her time and effort into her mercenary work, she is not one to shy away from danger and will put her life on the line to keep people safe. Those who have had the pleasure of working with her have noted her courage, charisma and her ability to think on her feet with a cool head. Despite her many years of service, with the blood of many on her hands, she has been able to maintain her compassion and good sense of judgement. By no means is she perfect as she carries many scars, both mentally and physically. However, her many years of training has taught her to think objectively and not allow her emotions get the better of her.
Being of a kind and caring character, many have nicknamed her "dragon grandma". Tempered but fierce, she commands a sense of respect from many of those who she has encountered while also winning the adoration of them. More often than not from the cookies she constantly bakes for her peers.

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The dialogue is subject to change so I'm open to suggestions.
Thanks a lot!