Thanks, pell!  Yeah, I'm not sure, I initially was thinking he'd be an established super hero, since we're coming in on him attempting to stop a bank robbery, flying, in full costume.  This probably isn't his first rodeo. 

Although I haven't actually written any dialogue, I just place the word balloons where there seem to be beats, I imagine him coming in here and saying something along the lines of "alright, you guys are done.  put your guns down, and i won't have to resort to melting your bones and internal organs"  *displays his arcane powers*

So maybe it's like a situation where he's trying to avoid any collateral damage altogether, and this time he catches a bullet.   Maybe the dialogue and/or narration can explain how these things usually go, and he gives them his spiel.  Just spitballin' here.

Anyway, here's some thumbs for the next pages.  I don't want him falling to be too overindulgent, but I'm also playing with a couple different layouts for showing it. 







Looking at them now, I'm thinking I'll have more than enough room on the actual pages to make some of these thumbnails into individual panels, rather than splashes.

Two more pages roughed.

Thanks, Mr. Kent!  I look forward to having more to see.  At the moment, I'm madly scribbling concept notes and thumbnails in my sketchbook, so I'll post up the thumbnail pages as soon as I've got the scene finished. 

Hey guys, this is my first post.  I've been lurking around for the last couple days while I brainstorm ideas for my first character.

I'm not sure I've settled on one yet, but here's a turnaround for one concept. 



I haven't figured out what his abilities are, or why he has an eye patch, and I'm not really sure I want my debut character to even be a "super hero/villain" type.  But anyway, just thought I'd post one of the ideas I'm kicking around to maybe get some suggestions.  I'll move on to sequentials once I've locked in my character choice.

Thanks for looking.