Watch some line width, page 2s Tiffs hands get lost in her body. Also holy fuck that colouring is pretty solid! I know you don't tackle it often but you've done it well.
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# 10
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Dec 10 2012, 01:47 PM
# 9
Posted:
Nov 21 2012, 08:22 PM
I agree with some of the notes on things being confusing; I still don't really understand your character super well, but I like her anyways. I look forward to more of her!
PS--I can't WAIT for Wizzie vs. Tiffany
PS--I can't WAIT for Wizzie vs. Tiffany
# 8
Posted:
Nov 15 2012, 09:58 AM
I need to fight you.
# 7
Posted:
Nov 15 2012, 01:22 AM
Thanks for the feedback, everybody!
@Pocky: I gotta reinstall my trial version of Photoshop, but I'll be putting your feedback into practice for sure.
@Jetster: I agree, I think some bits of this comic may be a bit unclear. Consistency and pacing are things I gotta work on, so I'll be paying extra attention to that with my next comics!
@Pocky: I gotta reinstall my trial version of Photoshop, but I'll be putting your feedback into practice for sure.
@Jetster: I agree, I think some bits of this comic may be a bit unclear. Consistency and pacing are things I gotta work on, so I'll be paying extra attention to that with my next comics!
# 6
Posted:
Nov 14 2012, 10:05 PM
Well that was fast!
HITLISTED D:<
HITLISTED D:<
# 5
Posted:
Nov 14 2012, 09:40 PM
ok I know I've seen your stuff for quite a while now and holy smokes this is so different from your other stuff! The coloring has a few 'cuts' where you didn't color it perfectly, and I only notice it because of your color pallete, which btw is a really nice choice of colors (and waaaay different from your other stuff). To avoid as many bleed/cuts of colors on linework, you can fill the colors above a layer that is poo colored (and anything that is usually bright will pop at your eyes when you do that). I think what makes this different from your other stuff is that the action/moves aren't wired to static poses that have been done by other characters from tv shows and stuff, and you have more flexibility to do whatever. I also see pencil marks from the linework. Since you got photoshop now. go to image>adjsutment>levels, and there are three eyedropper icons under the 'options' tab (right side). Press the WHITE eyedropper tool, and click on the white of your linework, that through scanning didn't completely turn out white (like yellow/grey part, aka. the pencil linework that you drew in blue for example). When you do this, the white eyedropper tool will fixate whatever color you click/chose and set THAT color as default white. You can also do it with the black eyedropper tool on linework, and that will set it to black.
# 4
Posted:
Nov 14 2012, 06:46 PM
Really inventive design, and entertaining concept! I'd love to see her Black Magic Lounge (I'd totally let her!)
# 3
Posted:
Nov 14 2012, 06:39 PM
oh my god its done and its amazing
# 2
Posted:
Nov 14 2012, 06:27 PM
I LOVE HER. Congrats on getting her in, we are going to have to blaze some shit up soon between her and Lady V for sure.
The colours are so sweet, I just wish that you were a little clearer with your images sometimes (eg. I didn't quite get in that second panel that it was her foot without some staring, and then it does look like it's hitting Mister Brass' face. I'm not sure what happened to him at the end either, he kind of disappeared). The way you write her is great though, I'm so stoked to see what you do with her.
The colours are so sweet, I just wish that you were a little clearer with your images sometimes (eg. I didn't quite get in that second panel that it was her foot without some staring, and then it does look like it's hitting Mister Brass' face. I'm not sure what happened to him at the end either, he kind of disappeared). The way you write her is great though, I'm so stoked to see what you do with her.
# 1
Posted:
Nov 14 2012, 05:07 PM
EXCITE
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